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Author Topic: My Art Thread, about the stuff that I draw, on Paper, with stuff like pencils.  (Read 2133 times)

Comic Kid

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Behold, a preview of how I will be making one of my series', hand-drawn and Paper Style.

Keep in mind that Luigi has some flaws that I've corrected and such, I'll post a pic later of how I improved.
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Luigi looks pretty good, actually.

If I may suggest, when displaying drawn art, don't make the background transparent. Just leave it all white, it'll look better, I think.

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His neck is a bit long, but meh.
« Last Edit: August 29, 2007, 05:58:00 PM by Comic Kid »
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A bit young? how do you mean?

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Wha? But ho-... Whatever *edits*

A bit LONG.
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Ah. That makes a ton more sense.

And, I agree.

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Yay, Luigi.  I just now managed to see this picture because I didn't know about the forum issue with sometimes showing incredibly small versions of pictures...  >.>  I thought you'd drawn something ridiculously small for our enjoyment...  and actually if anything Luigi's legs are too short he's the tall one ya know.
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Peoples!

Is his(her?) left eyebrow supposed to be on the outside of his hair or did you just not erase the lines properly?
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At the the time, yes, but future drawings in this style will likely not have that.

And it's a he.
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The first one I drew last night before I decided to have eyebrows underneath the hair. Well, the first one is really just a modification of my last drawing, I tried to make him more like a kid than teenager, cuz that's what he's supposed to be.
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Re: My Art Thread, about the stuff that I draw, on Paper, with stuff like pencil
« Reply #11 on: September 24, 2007, 03:02:50 PM »
Something wrong with that one in the middle. Emo hair...and a smile! Run away!

Seriously, these are good, especially for quick pencil drawings. I'd love to see the finished product.
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Well it's good you like them, I've been practicing for monthes and monthes.

I still think I suck at hands (and feet, which is why I cut off at the legs).

And the finish product will be a drawn comic, which (I hope) will start sometime this year.

MORE DRAWINGS!




(His hands are supposed to be in his pockets.)
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Re: My Art Thread, about the stuff that I draw, on Paper, with stuff like pencil
« Reply #13 on: September 25, 2007, 01:48:53 AM »
Trying out new emotion stuff.
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Re: My Art Thread, about the stuff that I draw, on Paper, with stuff like pencil
« Reply #14 on: September 25, 2007, 10:10:22 AM »
He looks rather happy to be a drawing.

You are kind of a one trick hair style (insert spiky front) but it's just me being picky.

And yea, you do need to work on your hands a bit...
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