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Poems from the gloom to you to veiw
« on: July 01, 2007, 12:45:33 PM »
I guess I will post my poems first, so here you go!
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Above the clouds

Up above us,
Are those nice white fluffy clouds,
That just seems to float there all day long.
So here we are,
Below these fluffy wonders and think,
What in the world are above the clouds?
People say the tops to mountains,
Others say space.
I say that both are right,
But the clouds have a job as well,
They hide creatures in our dwell.
Dragons, birds, and Pegasus' are up there too,
Some wanting to attack us,
Others wanting to feed,
And the rest need to sleep.
One day the dragons will attack us all,
Then the birds will feed on our remains,
The pegasus' will just lay around and cry from the damage that happens.
And only the strong would have survived,
This devastating slaughter.
So now some people would change their mind on those clouds,
Are those same fluffy clouds still nice and fluffy,
Or are they just there because they are?
Never judge the appearance of simple things,
They may deceive you one day,
And change your mind quickly.
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Ok so I will post all my poems that I have typed up, so that will be a lot so bare with me here. I hope you all enjoy it!
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Re: Poems from the gloom to u to veiw
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2007, 04:50:22 PM »
That's gotta be one of the most divinely bizarre works of poetry I have every seen...  Stupid doom clouds... or are they?  o.O?  heh  Nice.
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Re: Poems from the gloom to u to veiw
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2007, 05:10:46 PM »
Thank you, you are like, the first person to say something about it. I was going for bizarre, so yeays!
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Re: Poems from the gloom to you to veiw
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2007, 10:14:27 PM »
Here is another poem. I worte it to my boyfriend because I got very lonely without him. So I hope no on minds it.
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I Miss You

So I called you the day before you leave,
Just to go to work and not talk to me,
You told me you would talk,
On msn to me while you were there.
But here I am,
Just waiting for you again,
To go online and talk to me.
Why can't you see,
That I truly care for you,
I just want you to tell me about your day,
How it was and how much you miss me.
I miss you so much,
I am saving my money I get from mowing,
Just so I can go see you,
Talk to you and hug you again.
I want to tell you how much I missed you,
I want to help in any way,
But I don't have any good talents.
You have many and I am sad,
You are so far from me,
But I don't mind,
I just need you to talk to me!
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This is what happens when I have had no sugar and haven't talked to my boyfriend for 6 days. I hope everyone enjoys the poetry, I am sure to keep it up.
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« Reply #4 on: July 06, 2007, 05:35:47 PM »
Ok, so here is another poem for you all to read. I hope you all like it.
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Explosion

She sits in class,
When she hears that there is a bomb in the school,
And it is suppose to blast,
The next day during class.
She goes home with a wondering thought,
Is this a joke or not?
She calls her boyfriend and tells him this bomb threat,
He freaks out and tells her not to go to school the next day,
Her mom tells her to go,
Or she will be in big trouble.
So the next day,
She goes to school anyway,
And she was in her second period class when all of a sudden,
There was that big blast.
The school blows to bits,
Her body flies to the other side of the road,
And lands in the student parking lot.
The explosion goes on the news,
And her boyfriends watches,
As her body flies out from the school to the student parking lot.
He tears up,
And realizes that she was just listening to her mom.
He knew she would do anything to please her family,
And anything to please him,
But for her,
Family comes first.
This is what she got,
For being a good girl,
She got death earlier than she was suppose to.
The explosion killed 4 cops,
23 teachers,
And 600 students between grades 9 to 12.
So she wasn't the only one that suffered,
This horrible death,
In the fiery explosion.
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This happened to me in June. There was a bomb threat at my school, so I decided to write what would of happened if the bomb did blow up. I hope no one minds it. Please comment.
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« Reply #5 on: July 21, 2007, 08:51:48 PM »
Ok, so I see that barely anyone has posted. So I will post some more and just hope more people post.
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Fear, from Me

She goes to her room,
Only to see that her prized lego's are gone,
And that is when it starts.
Her family knows of her anger,
And how easy it is to start it.
But that is what her boyfriend knows as well,
So he try's not to push it.
But the next day,
When she went to see him,
She was still mad.
He lets her in,
And they do their usual things.
But when it came to him not letting her draw him,
She let it all flow out.
You stand there,
In fear of me,
Who stands before you,
With a long sharp knife,
Ready to take your life.
You ask me please,
Don't do this,
Because later on you will regret it.
I hesitate on this,
Thinking about what you just said,
And realized that,
I truly will miss you.
My hand now shakes before you,
The knife falls to the floor,
I stand there waiting for you to boot me out the door.
But when you get up,
And wrap your arms around my waist,
I stand there with tears streaming down my face.
I say sorry,
Tell you that it was just not my day,
You just tell me that it is ok,
That everybody has their days,
That happens a little like mine.
I tell you, well that's just fine.
We then go down to your room,
And sit there with a little light,
Drawing and writing and laughing.
I am glad that you no longer fear me,
For when times like those happen,
Even I fear myself,
For who in the world would trust me,
With something that sharp in my hands?
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Yeah, um that is just random and will never ever happen. I just thought that I should express some of my built up anger and throw it somewhere. So here you all go.
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Re: Poems from the gloom to you to veiw
« Reply #6 on: July 22, 2007, 06:01:55 PM »
These are...interesting, to say the least.
You have a cool viewpoint on things, expressed greatly in your first poem (which, by the way, I love).
Keep 'em coming.
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« Reply #7 on: July 23, 2007, 06:12:32 PM »
Yeays, thank you for commenting. I never really thought that anyone would love my first poem. I wrote it because my mom bought me a cool dragon poster and saw the clouds under them so I decided to write about it. Thank you once again.

Well, I just finished this one, so I will post it. Yes after you read it, you may think I am crazy. Well...I am. This is just some more anger I had to output somewhere else then on my pillow. So here we all go!
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Would You Ever?

Would you ever give a dog a gun?
Would you ever give a man a knife in a room full of people?
No, I doubt anyone would.
Then why would you give a dragon a sword and tell it to kill?
Why would you give a raccoon a light saber and let it loose in a city?
That would be crazy you say?
Well you seem to do just that.
Would you ever go and shoot a mafia leader by your self?
Would you ever go up and poke a wolf with no weapons?
Didn't think so.
Then why would you give a broken bottle to criminal and put him in a bar?
Why would you break my heart and not expect to be yelled at?
You would call me crazy for saying such things,
But you don't seem to understand my feelings at all.
Online I am called the wolf,
In real life I like to call myself a dragon,
Guess what you just did.
You poked the wolf with nothing at hand,
You gave that dragon a sword,
And you unleashed it on yourself!
This will make you think twice before you speak,
And leave me alone for more then 4 weeks.
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There you have it, my newest poem. I hope you all enjoyed it! If not, that's ok. I hope to see more comments or posts on this poem!
« Last Edit: December 10, 2007, 05:50:15 PM by Dark Dragon »
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« Reply #8 on: July 24, 2007, 02:32:14 PM »
Ok, the first one and the new one are now my two favroites.
Keep 'em coming.
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« Reply #9 on: July 26, 2007, 10:17:47 PM »
Ok, so this one took me a little while longer than I expected, but here it is. I like it because it just says what my boyfriend seems to do to me. Enjoy.
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You seem to

You seem to make me smile all day,
You seem to make me laugh when I'm sad,
You seem to make me happy when I'm mad,
You seem to cheer me up when I'm alone,
You seem to give me stuff just so I know,
That you love me so.
You seem to know when I am angry,
And you seem to keep my anger at bay,
You seem to make me proud to say,
That I have someone that keeps me happy all day.
You seem to know all of this,
Even if I never seemed to have told you,
You seem to already know.
You seem to know all of my pain,
You seem to know all my shame.
You seem to know how to make me happy,
In that simple little way.
I guess it would be easier if I just said,
You seem to know I love you so.
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There we go, I hope you all enjoyed it. I had fun typing this one out. I have also decided to post a bit of my older work and continue posting all my newer work. I hope no one minds it.
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« Reply #10 on: July 30, 2007, 04:07:16 PM »
Good poems Dragons thier better than anything I can write, more or less I can only write (in good style) pain or bloody and gorey scenes so congradulations on your poems good work~~
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« Reply #11 on: August 27, 2007, 01:03:16 PM »
I haven't posted in a long while, so here is my newest poem.
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Seems to be just me

For a few weeks now,
I have done quite a lot,
I would love to tell you all I've done,
But you haven't been online for me to talk.
Well, here let me type it up for you,
I've gotten new clothes,
Drawn a lot of pictures,
Went to my baseball tournament,
And best of all,
I won a trophy,
For most improved player.
You might not read this,
Or maybe you will,
It seems to be just me,
Talking to myself once again.
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There we go, enjoy!

Edit: Thanks, I didn't realize I did that. It's fixed now.
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Re: Poems from the gloom to you to veiw
« Reply #12 on: August 28, 2007, 06:45:52 PM »
Interesting.  That's the online life for you - if you're lucky, someone will actually reply to your posts.  Looking for friends online is a big hit-or-miss affair.  Congrats on the trophy!

"You might not read this, or maybe you won't," - I think you just said the same thing twice...
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« Reply #13 on: September 06, 2007, 03:12:43 PM »
Ok, so here is my newest poem. I just thought of it and decided to post it! Enjoy! Oh, and I might start putting my poems in colour. So I hope no one minds.
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Visions

She lays asleep,
And envisions someone's death,
Then bolts upright,
Out of bed.
She wonders why she gets these visions,
While she sleeps,
And then wonders,
What can I do about this?
That day she sees the person from her vision,
And she tells him about her vision,
And what she saw happen to him.
He tells her to lay off,
That she was lying to him,
And ignores her warning.
She sighs and figured that would happen,
So she followed him home,
And saw that he was about to cross on the red light,
Reading the same book from her vision,
And grabs his shirt to stop him,
And that same truck sped on by.
He looks up at her and asks her why?
She tells him that he was about to walk out and die.
Now everyone trusts her,
And those vision of her's.

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And there you have it. I like it and I hope everyone else does to. I know it's short, but the message is there. They have no names because they are random people like all my other poem characters. I hope you all enjoy!
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« Reply #14 on: September 10, 2007, 06:34:36 PM »
Ok, here is a poem that I had to type to let out some anger. So if you don't like, then don't read.
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Rejected

She loves him,
He loves her,
They talk on the phone,
But the problem occurs.
He tells her he isn't on a time limit,
Because before he was on a 15 minute limit,
But now he talks to her for 15 minutes still.
She gets upset,
He doesn't notice.
She hurts herself on accident while on the phone with him,
She says ow,
He asks her if she is ok,
She says yes but rubs her wound,
He says ok then.
This sets her off,
She tells him she could be bleeding to death and he would ask are you ok,
And all she had to do was say yeah I'm fine,
And then she would die because he would say,
Oh ok then.
They talk for 15 minutes and he says he has to go and gives her a lame excuse,
She sighs and hangs up without another word.
She sits in her room and then thinks,
I know what I can do.
A week later he gets a call from her mom,
He asks her what is wrong,
Her mom says that his girlfriend was in the hospital.
He rushes off to the hospital,
And goes to her room,
And sees her in the bed.
He looks down and asks will she be ok?
The nurse says that she will be fine.
Three days later this girl dies.
He lays on his bed now,
Crying as he realizes what she has done.
She has proved to him that he should never assume the better,
But to assume the worse.
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Ok, I hope every one likes it. If you do, then that's good, if not, don't tell me you hate it. I like it, so I hope some of you others do to.
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All this pain, all this hate, all that noise hurting my mind. I don't want to hear them, I want them to leave, I want to be left alone, with thoughts, not voices. They are mean, they are evil, they want me to do things that I just can't. I want them quiet, shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!! Leave me alone and let me think! Don't hurt me, stop taunting me, Stop making me cry and hurting myself! I just want to be FREE!!!!
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