Thanks man. I'm trying to give him a sort of Sesshomaru vibe (you know, from Inuyasha), but less totally-broken-can-kill-everyone. And of course Marco shows a lot more emotion than Sesshomaru later in the RP, but I'm still hoping to keep him as badass as possible.
Oh, and I got Chapter 3 up. It's pretty much focused on a new character's intro. In case it's not obvious, each chapter is supposed to focus on a character's intro, up until we get to the entire RP cast being together.