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Author Topic: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems  (Read 18535 times)

Chevalier-Ange

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Well, this looks like a good a place as any to start posting my stories and poems.  Once again, please feel free to comment, criticize and dissect if need be.  I actually want your feedback.  How can I improve, if no one says anything about them right?

Once there is a few of them here, I will put an index on the page so you don't have to go scrolling through pages and pages of posts to find the one you are looking for. Umm, that's assuming there is an 'iurl' code for this forum

Anyway...enjoy my friends.





1) The Watcher
2) The Arena
3) ...another time...another place
4) untitled
5) I Remember
6) His Armour teaser
7) His Armour
8 ) Armegeddon Racecars
9) A Song for Fione
10) Disloyality
11) My Love-letter to nobody
12) Angel on the Rampart/Still on the Rampart
13) Haunting Compassion (repost from FFQ)
14) If I had Wings...
15) The Fields of Mist
16) HiddenWords
17) Sixteen-second accent to servitude
18) Looking Back
19) The Gift
20) Roxas
21) Unpostable Chaos Rising RP Post
21) Dream Weavers
22) Two Flames of Love
23) I don't know...
24) The Knights Christmas
25) Twelve White Knights
26) The Oldest Night
27) "Because...it's too special."
28) Melting Heart
29) My other Shadow
30) Voice of Magic
31) Insomnia
32) untitled
33) Where everything I see makes sense.
34) untitled
35) Curse of the Misty Dragon
36) Dear Jane
37) untitled
38) Dream Weavers Again
39) 40 Days and 40 Nights
40) Untitled
41) Above all else
42) Thank You
43) My Broken Heart 
44) Untitled
45) William
46) Looking Back Again
47) Untitled
48) T'was my night before Christmas...
49) A Gift of His Heart
50) Untitled
51) Untitled
52) Some days...
53) Symbols  Frustration
54) Past, Present and Future
55) Wealth
56) Malleus Maleficarum
57) Winter
58) Unbroken
59) Save me...
60) Ruins
61) An Angels Prayer




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Take me with you, we will fly across the sea
To the land of the sun where our journeys begun
All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


Their story shall be told in another time...another place

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I hope this turns out the way I intended  it too ???]


The Watcher


“May peace go with you my friend.”

“…”

“Seriously...that’s all I could say.”

“…”

“What?”

“You of all people...always have something more to say then that.”

“Yeah…well, I didn’t this time ok.”

“Why not?”

“I don’t know…I…I just didn’t ok?”

“Did you at least keep the letter?”

“No…I threw it away actually.”

“…”

“Really. I did.”

“Wait…wait. You’re telling me, you sat there and watched this guy for 2 hours, read the letter he dropped, watched him vanish in the mist...and all you said was ‘Peace be with you my friend.’”

“Yeah…that’s it.”

“sigh…do you at least remember what it said”

“Oh yeah…every word actually.”

“…”

“What?”

“Do tell!”

“Fine.”

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“I really don’t know how to start this my friend.  I mean, I could just blurt it out, and watch you run for the hills, but…I have more respect for you then that, and I would like to think I have a bit more tact then that as well. 
I dunno, but then again, if I say nothing we could just add it to the list of unfinished sentences, and untold tales we seem to be piling up between the two of us right? Dammit, so many times I wish you would just say what’s truly on your mind.  Or what you really think and feel.  But no…you have to be mysterious all the time right? And you know what, I think somewhere inside; you really enjoy doing that to me.  All the time.
Argh…stupid heart. Stupid head.  Why…why must they fight all the time. Like how hard is it to just say what’s on your mind anyway?  Ugh…for us, I guess very hard huh?
Oh...and those dreams.  Those perfectly clear and vivid dreams.  And why…why do I remember every second of every one of them?
This is so ridiculous.  I should just tell you straight out.  Tell you exactly what I feel….”


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“Dammit, I can’t send this.  She’d never understand in a thousand years.” He said out loud. Then gazing at himself in the mirror for a second, he crumpled the letter, threw it in the trash, and disappeared into the waiting mist beyond his shower curtain.
« Last Edit: November 17, 2007, 11:55:37 PM by Chevalier-Ange »
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All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


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I like it, I'm not sure how you intended it to come out but it's kind of a balance between funny and sombre. For me that is.

I'm trying to think of some constructive criticism but for the moment all I can think of is that here...
"No...I threw it away actually."

"..."

"Really. It did."


...you want to be saying "Really. I did" rather than it did. This isn't particularily counstructive but when I can think of something I'll post it
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Ooops...yeah, I fixed that typo.  Thanks.  And he is supposed to be talking to himself in the mirror...not too sure if thats clear or not
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All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


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Oh, I didn't get that. That might be just me being slow and sleepy though
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Umm, that's assuming there is an [iurl] code for this forum.

There is.

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There is.

Indeed ^^ and it works well I might add.
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A cookie to whom ever can tell me what this is about.  Grey and OwA may NOT guess, because I know it will be obvious to them.

After I get a few guesses, or the right answer, whichever is first, I will tell you all what inspired this ^^


The Arena

He had waited for this moment for as long as he could remember.  Now, he was finally getting his chance.  His chance in the arena.  His chance to show what he was made of, and what he had learned.

He was young.  Too young most thought...but as apprehensive as he was, he wanted to prove to them all that he was worth the effort all had shown to him.  And more so, he wanted to prove to his Princess, who would be in the audience, he was worth her love as well.

Patiently he waited.  Waited, for the army of bowmen currently in the arena, to finish their fight.  There were many of them in there.  At least a hundred he could see, and then there were the support units off to the side. He could only hear them, not see them for they were just out of his sight.

Suddenly...silence.  Then the audience applauded softly.

His heart quickened its pace now.  Fear and angst befell him. "Oh what vile beast will they have me tame this night." He thought to himself. 

The army approaches him...from the arena door.  Somber they were.  Straight faced and weary eyed. "What magnificent bows they have." He thought to himself as they slowly walked past him. 

None said a word though.  Only the look on their faces said anything to him at all. He feels the fear once again.  Then...the major comes through the door.  Hers was the most beautiful bow of all. Golden and strung with the hair of a unicorn mare.

Their eyes meet in a passing glance.

"Be strong." She whispers, "fight with your soul, and don't lose sight of what's most important to you."

He simply bows his head in thanks as a bead of sweat falls from his brow and lands on his hand.

His hand he thought to himself.  "They have bows, and perfectly crafted weapons, and all I will be fighting with is these." He says to himself as he clinches his hands in a fist.

They call his name now. He raises his head and inhales deeply, and slowly he approaches the arena door. Inside, he sees the crowd staring at him.  They are silent, but their faces are filled with doubt, this he can easily see.  Lowering his head slightly, he clinches his fists again.

Then he hears it.  The sound of the scraping feet of his opponent.  He looks up nervously.  "Dear god what vile creature is this." He says to himself.  Then he sees it.  Its Armour is black and shining.  Its underbelly lined with rows upon rows of hardened steel wire. But what is most intimidating to him, what he fears the most...are its teeth.  All Eighty-eight of them.  White...parallel...perfectly formed. Created to slay young warriors such as himself.

Sighing, he folds his hands gently for a moment, then approaches his opponent and bows.  "I can do this." He says to himself as he begins attacking the beast.  Slowly at first, methodically, and with perfectly timed movements.

The beast does not like this, and snarls at his foe.

Pausing, the warrior hears the sounds of an unfamiliar reed as the beast summons Seven Sirens to aid in his cause.  The warrior pays no mind to them, and begins his assault once again.

As the Sirens begin their enchanting melody, the boy closes his eyes, and continues his assault on the beast before him, trying desperately to drown out the sounds of their call.  "...fight with you soul.." he hears echoing through his head, as he attacks with more speed, more intensity, and more strength.

The Sirens pause their calls now, awaiting their master's orders. But instead of instructing them, the beast summons thunderbolts to aid him. 

The young warrior opens his eyes, and stares at his now smiling opponent.  Fear fills his face as he looks to the audience for encouragement.  He finds it.  Several of the bowmen who were watching, leap over the wall and come to his side. He closes his eyes once again, and continues his attack on the beast...feeling every movement of his hands and fingers deep within his soul. 

In his right ear, he hears the sounds of the long bows.  Melodic they are as they attack the beast and aid the boy. The beast summons the thunder again.  Louder, and with more desperation then before.

The short bows now join the fight.  In the boys left ear he hears the shrilling sounds they make. He intensifies his attack even more now.  Rhythmically and with all his heart.

The beast fears for his life now. In a final act of desperation, he orders the Sirens choir again.

The boy then allows his heart, and his soul to surface for the fight. The repeated sounds of the bows beyond him enchant him, and he ignores the Sirens.

The audience stands and cheers.  The Sirens call his name over and over again. The bows continue their melodic onslaughts.  The boy attacks repeatedly...viciously and with more ease now. He is entranced.  One single purpose he now has.  Slay his foe. 

The audience is on the tips of their toes as the final moments of the battle arrive.  The Sirens wail for all they're worth, the beast summons one last crashing thunderbolt; the bows continue their attack with perfect harmony.

...

The beast is subdued.

The Sirens quiet.

The bows then stop.

The boy opens his eyes, and adds the final blows to his foe.  Slowly...carefully...methodically.

One last strike...and the beast is dead.

The audience roars in appreciation.  Still standing they applaud the boy as he bows humbly.

The beast is dead...
Seven Sirens he no longer hears.
Then he turns to thank the bowmen,
And sheds a single Silver tear.

« Last Edit: July 06, 2007, 07:17:28 PM by Chevalier-Ange »
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Mmph mmphhmm!

I like it.  :)
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^^ very nice.
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Thanks ^^

Although I didnt expect you two to be the first to read it that works out well for those guessing <_<
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The best guess I can think of is that this is what you did over the weekend.  I mean, it suits you.
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LMAO...Grey and OwA are going to laugh at you my friend. I wish it was what I did <_<
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I thought it was quite obvious that I really don't know.  Not only that it doesn't seem familiar at all.  :-D  You're right though, if it'd been you, you'd of used a weapon and the sirens would of been drawn to you rather than trying to draw you to them.
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Over the weekend? I thought this was a customer!
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