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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #30 on: July 08, 2007, 04:30:43 PM »
Yay more friendship writings, you should publish a book about friends/friendship containing your writings.  I'm sure there'd be plenty of sentimental people that would make it a best seller.  Maybe even me, if I bought books...
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #31 on: July 08, 2007, 04:33:09 PM »
Thank you for your vote of confidance my friend.  :)
However...I suspect that would never be the case though.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #32 on: July 08, 2007, 04:34:58 PM »
Only cause I don't buy books... Poor guy.  Oh well, you can keep sharing with us... I give you permission.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #33 on: July 08, 2007, 04:58:27 PM »
I second SF's permission, not that you needed it.

It's far more... relaxing than some of your other poems with the same friendship theme.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #34 on: July 08, 2007, 05:08:09 PM »
Relaxing?  Umm, meaning?  :-\
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All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time

Their story shall be told in another time...another place

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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #35 on: July 08, 2007, 05:52:19 PM »
Not that I'm him, but I would guess it has to do with the imagery you chose to use and that what you wrote had no sad undertones or anything...  No dejection just pleasant friendship yummies...  A heart warming/relaxing yarn. 
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #36 on: July 08, 2007, 05:53:11 PM »
Exactly.

It totally needs a fruity beverage with little umbrella though.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #37 on: July 08, 2007, 06:55:00 PM »
Ooh. I like those.

And CA, you're writing corny things again. >P

Though... pretty.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #38 on: July 08, 2007, 07:00:47 PM »
True... it is corny, but that's okay.  I like corn.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #39 on: July 08, 2007, 08:10:32 PM »
Quote from: WhiteNoise on July 08, 2007, 06:55:00 PM
Ooh. I like those.

And CA, you're writing corny things again. >P

Though... pretty.

Thanks...I think.  :-\
Glad you approve
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #40 on: July 09, 2007, 12:16:47 AM »
He's not writing corny, it's cheesy.

Mmm... cheese...
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #41 on: July 09, 2007, 05:05:47 PM »
You guys slay me you know that.   :( Fine...you want cheese.  Well, here it is.  Hell, it might even be corny for all I know.  Anyway...enjoy.  This is a one time thing, so...


As the day turns to night,
the sun hides away & the moon comes out to play.
Know that I am always by your side...
every step of the way.

Brought into this world for a purpose,
brought together by friendship.
As our friendship ignited,
our hearts became warmed...
with love from one another.
A love that is unstoppable!
I do not want to be without you...

You are on my mind,
in my heart,
wrapped in the arms of my soul.
Love, love of my life
you will always be.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #42 on: July 09, 2007, 05:18:10 PM »
Here's the funny thing. You tried to write cheesy and it came out heartfelt (albeit a bit over the top at the end).

At any rate, I enjoyed it.
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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #43 on: July 09, 2007, 05:20:56 PM »
  >:(

I see there is no pleasing you my friend /sigh

...will you please make up your mind?

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Re: Dreamscapes and Visions, Truths and Tales, and of course...a few Poems
« Reply #44 on: July 09, 2007, 05:31:09 PM »
Actually warrior...a gift for you.  'Cheesy Corn'.  Have at it my friend.

~ I Remember,

The way I felt when our eyes first met.
The sensation that ran like wild fire through my body after our first touch,
The thoughts that run rampidly through my mind each and every day,
To the dreams that comfort me each and every knight,
~ I Remember.

And most of all,

~ I Remember

What my life was like when I did not have you,
I will never go back!

~ I Remember You,

Knight and Day
Forevermore
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Take me with you, we will fly across the sea
To the land of the sun where our journeys begun
All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time

Their story shall be told in another time...another place
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