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Welcome to Slasherville
« on: July 02, 2007, 03:51:27 PM »
despite the title, it doesn't have much blood or slashing. Well I will put up the first chapter so you all can read it.
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warning: choosing of assassin team, questions asked, and diologe a plenty.

Welcome to Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter one:
Meet the team

      "Ok, you can choose your own team. You can choose anyone in this town, and that includes everyone but me," Leader said to the young dragon female.
   "Anyone but you? Well I would like you to have your best and greatest assassins lined up in that room for me tomorrow at this time, my only favor," the young dragon female said as she turned and left the huge building.
   "I knew I could trust her," Leader told his secretary.
   "She is born made a leader," she said as she typed down some things on her laptop.

The next morning...

   "They are right through the door you wanted them to be," Leader told the young dragon female.
   "Thank you, how many are in there?" she asked him with a stern look.
   "21, you can choose as many as you want," Leader told her.
   "Fine then," she said and walked into the room. Lots of murmuring was about her and her size and age, she just glared and looked around.
   "Ok, I am here to choose my team, so line up straight and listen to me or you will die," she ordered.
   "Hn, before you choose, answer me some questions," an older male asked her, he had black raven wings and black spikes on his shirt and pants.
   "What is it?" the young dragon girl asked impatiently.
   "How old are you?" the spiked raven male asked her with a smirk.
   "*Sigh* 16," she answered exasperated.
   "Really? That's quite young to be a leader, why are we here?" the spiked raven male asked.
   "Because the leader took me from my home and asked me to choose a damn team, any more questions?" she responded, her teeth changing into dragon teeth.
   "Just one," the spiked raven male answered.
   "What?" she growled out.
   "What is you rank?" he smirked.
   "Class S, why?" she asked. Everyone in the room was shocked that someone so young was a top class.
   "C-c-class S!!! Impossible! Someone your age could never be such a high class!" a female with ice blue hair exclaimed.
   "I am here to choose my team. I want my team to be the best, so you all better be just as high class as I am. If you are under class S, get out now!" she growled out. After that was said, 8 people left the room with there heads down in shame.
   "You 13 people, you are my team," I said simply.
   "What!!! Just like that? You don't want to test our skill? Nothing to stump us or something?" the wolf male asked.
   "FOX!!!" everyone yelled.
   "Nothing, just like that. Unless..." the young dragon female smirked.
   "NOO!!" the others cried.
   "Then there you have it, you are my team," she said with a smile.
   They walked out of the room and over to Leader. He looked at the young dragon female with a small smile.
   "This is your team?" he asked.
   "Yes, let it be known, I, The Dragon, have a team," The Dragon said. Her team gasped.
   "Well, you should get to know your team and their abilities before going on missions. Chameleon, show yourself now," Leader stated.
   "I can't help it, it happens a lot. I can't stop it," Chameleon said with a sadden look.
   "I hope you can fix that Dragon," Leader sighed.
   "I will try my best," Dragon said, with a sigh.
   "So, this is serious. Ok, let's go somewhere where you will be comfortable talking to us," the spiked raven male said.
   "Ok, I know exactly where to go," Dragon said and she led her team to the quiet park.
   "So you're comfortable here? So be it," the icy blue haired women said.
   "I will start the introductions then. My assassin name is Dragon for the sole purpose that I am part dragon. My real name is Rose. I'm 16 years old, more mature then most people, and I have a lot of hobbies," I started. I looked at my team and pointed to the spiked raven male, "You go next, it follows down the line."
   "Ok then. My assassin name is Black Thorn for I control the black roses. I am part raven and my real name is Tentigetska. I'm 20 years old and I have an active imagination. I have plenty of hobbies," Tentigetska said and looked to the icy blue haired women.
   "Ok, my assassin name is Icy because I have control over ice and water. My real name is Isabella. I have 2 sides to me, my nice side and my evil side. I'm 18 years old and I have a lot of hobbies. I am very useful in fights," Isabella said and looked at the wolf male.
   "Ok, my assassin name is Flames because I control fire, smoke, and lava. My real name is Fox and I'm 22 years old. I can make myself go up in flames, I can become a full wolf, and I can do both at the same time. I have one hobby," Fox stated with a sad smile. He looked beside him at the male with hawk looking attributes.
   "Aight, my assassin name is Hawk because...well look at me. My real name is Henry and I'm 18 years old. I have very little hobbies," Henry said. He looked to the mole male beside him.
   "Well, my assassin name Mole because I'm part mole. My real name is Matt. I'm 18 years old and I have a wild imagination. I have lots of hobbies," Matt said. He looked to the male with 2 cuts on the right side of his face.
   "Hm, my assassin name is Shadow because I can become a shadow, I can make shadow me's and that's all you need to know about that. My real name is Sam. I'm 23 years old, very mature, and I have no hobbies," Sam stated bluntly. He looked beside him to the young male with purple eyes.
   "Oh...me...m...my assassin name is...Repeat. I control...sound waves and I can manipulate them to sound like anything I want. M...my real name is...Smelkute. I'm 19 years old and I'm shy. I have no hobbies," Smelkute stuttered. He looked beside him to the young male with lightning bolt bracelets.
   "Kee, my assassin name is Speedy because I'm lightning fast. I control lightning as well. My real name is Ray and I'm 21 years old. I'm a very happy fellow, and I have plenty of hobbies," Ray said with a smile. It crept me out. He looked beside him to the male with a dragon wing and a raven wing.
   "Cool, my assassin name is Shapeshift because I do just that. My real name is Sengi and I'm 22 years old. I can become anything I want, and I have a few hobbies," Sengi said. He looked to the male with...pink nail polished nails.
   "...my assassin name is Reflect because I can make illusions and can reflect images to confuse enemies. My real name is Roy. I'm 22 years old and very mature. I have a few hobbies," Roy muttered. He looked beside him to the male with eerie red eyes.
   "Hn, my assassin name is Unknown because I'm exactly like that. My real name is Ugenity. I'm 23 years old. I have a few hobbies," Ugenity said with a hint of evil in his voice. He looked beside him to Chameleon.
   "Well my assassin name is Chameleon because I can blend into my surroundings, too well though. My real name is Cretateal. I'm 22 years old and have a few hobbies," Cretateal said with a sadden smile. He looked at the last male in line.
   "My assassin name is Reptile because I can become any reptile or anything from the frog family. My real name is Reggie. I'm 23 years old, and I have no hobbies," Reggie said quickly.
   "Now that we know each other, let's go out tonight. To my favorite club!" I said as I headed off in that general direction.
   "Ok," everyone else said and followed me.

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If any of you remember me from FFQ, I always put a short warning to give you an idea of what happens in my story. I also have a thing to put that it is by me. If you have been to FFQ and started to read my story 'Silent Killers', this is my newer version of it. So I hope you all like it, enjoy! I will put up my chapters when I am done.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #1 on: July 02, 2007, 04:47:19 PM »
Just putting up my second chapter in hopes to have people read my story.
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warning: At a club, talking, arguement, plotting phone call, letter, phone call, acting, and diologe a plenty.

Welcome to Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter two:
To 'Bizarre'!
   "So she has a favorite club, at that age?" Isabella whispered to Tentigetska.
   "I guess she does," Tentigetska whispered in response.
   *Knock, knock, knock!*
   "Hello? Oh, hey Rose, nice to see you again. Welcome!" the door guard said as he opened the door for me.
   "Pleasure bein' here," I responded with no emotion in my voice.
   "Hey, the rest of you lot gotta..."
   "They're with me," I said quickly, cutting him off.
   "Oh, who are they?" the door guard asked with curiosity.
   "Meet my assassin team," I said waving my hand to them.
   "Oh, hello, the name is Frank," Frank said kindly to the rest of my team.
   "Hey," everyone said in response.
   I wandered off to a lone table like usual, and everyone else danced and drank their hearts out.
   "Well, look who it is. My usual customer," Will said with a smirk.
   "Well look who it is, my usual waiter," I said with a smirk as well.
   "Let me guess, your usual," Will responded so casually.
   "Yeppers," I responded with a smile.
   "Ok, comin' up," Will said and left.
   "Did you send her the letter?" Roy asked. He, Sam, Smelkute, Ugenity, and Tentigetska all sat at a table.
   "Yes, I did. I hope she gets it," Tentigetska said with a small smile.
   "Let's hope she reads it," Sam muttered, Smelkute just nodded at the statement.
   "That to," Tentigetska responded. Roy then nudged him, "What?"
   "Isn't that Rose sitting alone at that table eating a big meal?" Roy asked pointing in my direction.
   "It is!" Tentigetska replied and smiled a little.
   "Go talk to her," Ugenity said bluntly, like it was so obvious that Tentigetska would.
   "Ok," Tentigetska said as he got up.  He walked over to my table as I finished my salad.
   "Hey," Tentigetska said as he sat down across from me.
   "*Gulp* Hey, what's up?" I responded after I had a gulp of Dragon's Blood (the strongest alcohol) and put my fork down.
   "I was wondering why you were sitting all alone over here. Why aren't you out dancing or having fun?" Tentigetska asked with a curious look on his face.
   "I had to get some food in my system or else I would starve. I don't dance, and having fun for me would be killing and leading," I stated bluntly.
   "Well I'm sure you can do something else. Can you sing?" Tentigetska asked. I just glared and looked away.
   "I can sing, but I prefer not to," I said with a light blush.
   "Well can I hear you sing?" Tentigetska asked nicely.
   "I don't want to," I said with a menacing look.
   "Well, I am sure dragohumans can do plenty of things," Tentigetska said with a smile.
   "Are you degrading my kind?" I said with a hint of anger.
   "What do you mean?" Tentigetska asked a bit confused.
   "Calling me a dragohuman. Just because I am part dragon doesn't mean I am less of a person," I said raising my voice a little.
   "Oh, that? I'm sorry, but I didn't know how else to put it," Tentigetska said with an apologetic look.
   "Well, what would you call yourself? You are part raven, would that mean you are sub-human?" I growled. It was quite obvious I was ticked off.
   "I'm a Nevar thank you," Tentigetska said with a hint of anger in his voice. He was getting mad at what I was saying.
   "Well, that makes no sense at all. You know, I could have told Frank to leave you at the door," I said no longer trying to hide my anger.
   "I don't know why you are arguing about something so small," Tentigetska said not holding back his anger, "You know what, my first impression of YOUR KIND is that they are rude and selfish!" Tentigetska yelled as he got up and left.
   "You are so oblivious!" I yelled. I got up and headed for the door to leave the club.
   "What's wrong Rose?" Frank asked me as I headed his way.
   "I'm leaving, keep an eye on Tentigetska. He is the one with the black raven wings. He is a hazard," I said trying to hide my anger towards Tentigetska.
   "Got it," Frank told me and I left.
   I walked home and stopped at my door. I looked down and saw a grey envelope and saw it was sealed with a sticker of a pair of black wings.
   "Hmmm, who is this from?" I asked myself walking into my home.

Back at the club...
   "Well, that didn't seem to go well," Roy stated as Tentigetska sat back down at their table.
   "I know. What do I do, she might call the number," Tentigetska said worried.
   "Make someone up and be nice to her," Sam suggested.
   "Ok, but how do I get away with it. She might want to meet my made up persona," Tentigetska said looking down.
   "That's when me and Ugenity here will kick in," Roy said with a wink and a smile.
   "Ok, I guess I can do this," Tentigetska said with a small smile.
   "Now, before you do anything listen. You must not let her know it's you so make up a nickname. Next let her do the talking, then you give her advice or comfort her. Then if she asks you out, ask her what time and where she lives so you can pick her up. Simple," Ugenity said calmly.
   "Got it," Tentigetska said shyly.

Meanwhile, at Rose's home...
   "Well let's read the letter," I sighed and opened the envelope.
   I opened the letter and sat on my bed. I turned on my lamp and laid down holding the letter up to read.

   Dear Rose,
      I'm just wondering if you have a boyfriend, but I know I shouldn't be asking this. I know it sounds rude, but that's what I am wondering. I would love it if you called me sometime, my number is 243-778- 1030  that's my cell phone number, I always answer my cell. Call me any time you want to talk.

         Sincerely,
            You will find out if you call, hehe.

   "Joy, well I guess I could call this person. I have nothing better to do, and I do need to talk to someone," I said to myself. I picked up my cell phone from my bedside table and dialed the number.

At the club...
   *Ring, ring*
   "Hey, your phone is ringing," Smelkute pointed to Tentigetska.
   "It has to be her!" Tentigetska panicked.
   "Answer it," Roy urged.
   "Hello?" Tentigetska asked, sounding unusually calm.
   "Hey, who is this?" I asked with a calm tone.
   "This is Black...Flame. Who is this?" Tentigetska asked still calm.
   "Dragon, so how are you?" I asked also calm.
   "I'm good," Tentigetska responded, and waved to the guys and teleported to the roof of the club.
   "That's good, I can't say the same thing though," I sighed.
   "Oh? Why not?"
   "Well, I have an assassin team."
   "Well that should be good, go on."
   "And there's this one guy."
   "Uh-oh."
   "Yeah, I know, sounds bad. He called me rude earlier today."
   "Why did he do that?" Although he knew full well why.
   "Well, I was being kind of rude. But it is in Drago nature to do it."
   "So you're part Drago? Well what happened?" He knew too well what happened.
   "Well, he sat down at my table we talked, then he called me dragohuman."
   "You don't like being called that do you?"
   "Not at all. It makes me sound less of a human than everyone, and that hurts a lot."
   "Did you tell him that?"
   "...oops."
   "Oops? I guess not."
   "I didn't tell him that, but I did yell at him for it."
   "Well that doesn't help now does it?"
   "I know, well then our argument got worse and he said his impression of my kind was that we are rude and selfish."
   "Ouch, that must hurt a lot."
   "It does. I wasn't selfish at all though."
   "Ok, then what happened?"
   "Then I left and came home, and found a letter on my doorstep."
   "Ahh, well then you called the right man."
   "So, what do you think I should do?"
   "Well, you might want to explain to him why you exploded on him earlier."
   "That might help."
   "Indeed, then you might want to apologize for the explosion."
   "Wait a minute, he started it!"
   "I know, but do you want to be the bigger person and fix the mistake first or not?"
   "Good point."
   "I am sure he will realize this and apologize as well."
   "Thank you. You seem nice, I like you already."
   "A lot of people do. You seem nice as well, I like you already."
   "Not many people do."
   "Aww, and who's fault is that?"
   "My own, I know."
   "Well, I'm a bit busy so.."
   "Want to be my phone buddy?"
   "Really?"
   "Really."
   "Sure why not. I like to talk with you."
   "Thank you, I will call you tomorrow, if you aren't busy."
   "I don't mind."
   "Ok then, call you tomorrow."
   "Bye."
   "Bye."
   Tentigetska hung up and teleported back into the club. Sat down and smiled.
   "Well?" Roy asked anxiously waiting for how it went.
   "Black Flame has a phone buddy," Tentigetska said with a smile.
   "She bought it!" Ugenity exclaimed. He was surprised at this.
   "Yup, we fixed our differences, or at least, tomorrow we will," Tentigetska said with a smile.
   "Ironic, you are telling her how to do things that help you," Sam stated bluntly.
   "I know. She will call me tomorrow as well," Tentigetska replied still with his smile.
   "So you are sticking with this fake persona aren't you?" Roy said with a small smile.
   "Indeed, so when she wants to meet Black Flame, you two gotta help me out," Tentigetska said as he got up.
   "So you're going home to rest aren't you?" Sam smirked to him.
   "Yup, see you all tomorrow," Tentigetska said waving. He then left the club to go to his house.

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And there you have it, my second chapter. I love my stories so much, I hope you people enjoy them as much as I enjoy typing them. Have fun reading and commenting!
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All this pain, all this hate, all that noise hurting my mind. I don't want to hear them, I want them to leave, I want to be left alone, with thoughts, not voices. They are mean, they are evil, they want me to do things that I just can't. I want them quiet, shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!! Leave me alone and let me think! Don't hurt me, stop taunting me, Stop making me cry and hurting myself! I just want to be FREE!!!!

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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #2 on: July 23, 2007, 06:50:26 PM »
Joy, ok here is the third chapter. Enjoy!
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warning: apology, death, blood, experimental pills, phone call, and diolouge a plentyful.

Welcome to Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter three:
On Duty

   "Ok, Rose, you and your team are to go to Bensworth and kill Pengoti. He is a very good assassin not easily tricked. So be careful," Leader briefed.
   "Got it," I said as we all left in a flash.
   It was a three day travel to get to Bensworth, so on the first night that we had to rest, I decided to make some adjustments.
   "Hey, um, Tenti, can I speak with you privately?" I asked as I walked over to a tree.
   "Sure," Tentigetska answered as he followed me to the tree.
   "I...want to apologize for exploding on you the other day at the club. I guess I should have told you that I don't like being call dragohuman. Can you forgive me?" I explained all at once.
   "I do forgive you. I am sorry for yelling at you as well. I didn't mean to call you rude or selfish. I'm sorry," Tentigetska said as he looked away.
   "Thank you, let's try not to do that again, ok?" I said with a small smile.
   "Yeah, agreed," Tentigetska said as he walked off.
   "I guess I can't call him today," I sighed as I laid down on a branch in the tree I had previously stood at.
   The next few hours were just making the plan and getting to Bensworth.
   "Ok, so we all know the plan, right?" I whispered to everyone as we sat huddled in a tree.
   Everyone nodded and then we dispersed. We saw Pengoti and the plan was in action. He had a big group of girls around him, he was obviously drunk. That made it easier for us. Mole dug a hole, Reflect made it look like solid ground, and Shapeshift became the bait. He was a lost puppy and lead Pengoti right to the trap.
   "Hey there little pooch, are you lost?" Pengoti asked. Shapeshift whined and started off to the hole.
   Once Shapeshift got to the hole he jumped it, "That's not a normal jump for a dog," Pengoti mumbled and he took 3 more steps and fell right on in the hole. Chameleon slashed at him until he was dead, he was still camouflaged when he got out of the hole.
   "Time to get rid of the witnesses," I called out to the others that were hidden.
   Black Thorn took care of it, he had black rose vines wrap up all the girls and killed them by having the vines tighten around them all.
   "Ok, time to head home. Cretateal, I have something for you to test," I ordered.
   "Eep, what is it?" Cretateal asked edging towards me.
   "Medicine, for your disappearing act. It will let you control when you want to camouflage, but," I explained to Cretateal.
   "But? There's an after effect isn't there?" Cretateal sounded worried.
   "Yes, the after effect is that you will become slightly blood thirsty and you will focus more than normal. It wears off after about 10 hours, so you need to take 2 a day, got it?" I told him simply.
   "Ok," Cretateal said as he took the medication from me and took one.
   "Alright gang, let's go home," I said as we all started to go home.
   Once we got back to headquarters Leader looked at Cretateal first to see that he can still see him.
   "Well, looks like you helped him a bit eh Dragon?" Leader commented as Cretateal looked a little blood thirsty and focused.
   "Yeah, but there are after effects," I said as Cretateal went outside.
   "I don't want to know," Leader said, with a sigh.
   "Ok, so are we done for the day?" I asked with a slightly tired look.
   "Yes you are," Leader said, and we all left to our homes.
   "I haven't called him for a long while. Might as well call him now," I said and picked up my cell phone and dialed the number.
   "Mmm...Hello?" Tentigetska mumbled as he answered his cell phone.
   "Man, you sound beat," I responded.
   "I got done one of my missions, so yeah I guess I do," Tentigetska mumbled.
   "Well, I guess I should call back tomorrow when you aren't beat," I snickered.
   "No, no, I'm plenty awake if you need to talk."
   "Thanks, well I did make up with my assassin member like you suggested I do."
   "That's good, and what did he do?"
   "He apologized right after I did."
   "Well that's good."
   "Yeah, and it's all thanks to you, Black Flame."
   "Indeed it is."
   "Hey, want to go out for coffee, so we can meet in person?"
   "Sure, When?"
   "How about tomorrow?"
   "Sure."
   "Pick me up at 3 pm?"
   "Sure. Where do you live?"
   "Oh, well I live on 24 Ferrengo Street."
   "Ok, I can find my way there...somehow."
   "All right, well I got back from a mission as well, so see you tomorrow."
   "Mmm...yeah."
   "Bye. Sleep tight sleepy head."
   "Ha ha, night," Tentigetska said and hung up, "Great, Now I have to get Roy and Ugenity to help me out now."

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There you have it, a cliffhanger! I am still working on the fourth chapter so that will be a wait, but hopefully not a long one. I hope you all enjoyed it, please comment.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #3 on: July 24, 2007, 10:31:00 AM »
You've got the basic plot and everything, but I think you need to detail things a bit more. The whole assasination was like three sentances, and though I know what you meant, it would have been cooler with some more explanation.

Also, this is probably the first time I've seen first-person omniscient (or however you spell it) style, sounds like she's retelling a story that already happened to her.

Other than that it's good, just add more detail to actions.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #4 on: July 24, 2007, 12:19:39 PM »
Ok, I will keep that in mind. Thank you!
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2007, 04:00:39 PM »
Make the fourth chapter funny please and also make the killing scenes more bloody and gorey.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #6 on: August 02, 2007, 07:24:56 PM »
I will do what I can, but I can't make any promises. Besides, I'm not sure other people reading like that kind of stuff.
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« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2007, 09:36:28 PM »
who wouldn't?
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« Reply #8 on: September 04, 2007, 07:25:55 PM »
Ok, so here is the fourth chapter. I know it has been a long time, but I finally got around to it. Enjoy!
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warning: phone calls, disguising, date, and diolouge a plentyful!

Welcome to Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter four:
Out for coffee

   "Mmmm...'ello?" Roy said as he answered his phone.
   "Hey, she asked Black Flame out for coffee tomorrow," Tentigetska said as he lay on his back on his bed.
   "So you want me and Ugenity to help you change your appearance so she is none the wiser," Roy stated bluntly.
   "Pretty much," Tentigetska said as he removed his shirt.
   "Ok, when are you picking her up?" Roy asked, really tired.
   "At 3 pm," Tentigetska said as he lay back down on his bed.
   "Ok, bye then," Roy said and hung up.
   "Good, now that I know I have their help I can rest easy," Tentigetska said as he drifted off to sleep.

The next morning at 9 am...

      "Rose, you look nice today," Matt said as he just popped up from the ground as I was walking off to the park.
   "Thank you," I said as he got out of his hole and followed me.
   "Is today special for you?" Matt asked out of curiosity.
   "Yeah, kinda. I'm meeting my phone buddy in person," I responded.
   "Oh, ok then," Matt said as he jumped up and into the ground creating a new hole and dug off.

Noon, at Roy's house...

   "Ok, we have 3 hours to make you look like Black Flame. Start describing him Tenti," Roy said as he and Ugenity sat in chairs by him.
   "He is part Raven, he likes fire, he has green eyes, a punk style of clothing, and that's all I can think of," Tentigetska explained as Roy wrote all that down.
   "Good, now we get to work," Roy said with a small yet still evil smile.
   Roy and Ugenity used their powers to make Tentigetska look just like his alternate persona. His wings were a bit darker than normal.
   "Thank you guys," Tentigetska said as he looked at the new him.
   "Well you need a new name," Roy said as he sat back to look at his work.
   "I don't know, can you guys help me out?" Tentigetska asked, a little lost.
   "Kalasky," Ugenity suggested.
   "Thank you. That sounds cool," Tentigetska said, then looked at his watch.
   "You better hurry," Roy said as Tentigetska rushed out the door.

At Rose's house, 3:05pm...

   "Where is he?" I muttered as I sat on the couch, scratching my hand.
   *Knock knock*
   "Coming!" I said and hurried to the door.
   I opened the door with a smile and hugged the guy at my door.
   "Well, you seem really happy. Something special happen to you today?" Tentigetska said with a playful smile.
   "Yes, you showed up," I said happily.
   "Well then, that is pretty special isn't it?" Tentigetska said, holding my hand and lead me out of my house.
   "It is," I said closing my door.
   "Let's go," Tentigetska said. We then took off to the coffee shop down town.
   Once we got to the coffee shop we sat down at a table and ordered our coffee. Then we started to get to know each other.
   "So, what is your real name?" I asked, taking a sip of my coffee.
   "Kalasky," Tentigetska said, taking a sip of his coffee.
   "Wow," I responded.
   "What?" Tentigetska asked, looking skeptical.
   "That's a friggin awesome name!" I said with giggles.
   "Thank you," Tentigetska said with a smile.
   "So do you work in a group or solo?" I asked him.
   "Solo." *sip*
   "Wow, that must be hard." *sip*
   "Only a little."
   "I bet only a little."
   "So how many is in your group?" *sip*
   "13." *sip*
   "Wow, that's a lot of people in one group."
   "It's not too bad."
   "Do you have a crush on anyone in your group?" *sip*
   "Yes." *blush* *sip*
   "Really?" *surprised expression*
   "Yeah."
   "Who?" *sip*
   "Not telling." *blush* *sip*
   "Oh come. Please?"
   "Ok, Tentigetska." *blush darkens*
   "Really? I thought you and him got into fights a lot?"
   "I know, but he is cute, smart, and very well talented. I love him." *finishes coffee*
   "I see. Have you told him your feelings yet?" *finishes coffee*
   "No! I can't do that!"
   "Why not?"
   "Then he would be distracted from work and we could get hurt."
   "Good point."
   "I guess we could do this again some other time."
   "How about next week."
   "Next Friday at 3pm."
   "See you then."
   After he walked me home, I went to my room and sighed. 'He is sooo hot!'

At Tentigetska's house, at 7pm...

   "She loves me," Tentigetska said, he sighed and laid on his bed.
   *Spiffy ring tone here!*
   "Hello," Tentigetska said as he answered his phone.
   "You want to look like you or not?" Roy asked.
   "I'll be right over." Tentigetska said and hung up. He then went to Roy's house.
   "Back to look like Tenti once more," Roy said jokingly.
   "She wants to go out with Kalasky next Friday at 3pm again," Tentigetska said as Roy and Ugenity made him look like him once more.
   "Damn you're good at this," Roy said with a smile.
   "I learned a thing or two while talking to her at the coffee shop as well," Tentigetska said with a small blush.
   "Don't tell us, please," Ugenity said as they finished up.
   "Ok," Tentigetska replied and went home.
   "Why did you do that! I wanted to know!" Roy yelled at Ugenity.

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There you have it, my fourth chapter. Don't ask me when the fifth one will be done because I don't know. Just read and comment or post or something. Just don't chew me out on anything.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #9 on: October 10, 2007, 07:14:20 PM »
dark dragon, y arn't you updating?
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2007, 12:53:33 PM »
Hard to update when my computer has no internet, so I have to use my brothers, and my story isn't on his computer. But I will try to get my stories and poems on to my jump drive and transfer them onto the downstairs computer, that should help me a bit. So you all will have to wait just a bit longer for the 5th chapter.
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« Reply #11 on: October 29, 2007, 09:26:28 PM »
Ok, so I know it has been a very long time, but here it is. The fifth chapter is done, so I hope you all enjoy it.
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Chapter five
A little secret
   "Today, I've asked Dragon to decide where she wants to go for this mission. She will tell you everything about this mission, because she has planned it all. Dragon, please explain your plan," Leader briefed, everyone looked at Dragon.
   "Ok, we're heading off to Bandit Valley, right outside of Huntston, and we are going to stop the transport truck that is going into the town, go it?" Dragon explained, looking for anyone that had questions.
   "One question, why are we stopping this transport truck?" Icy asked, very confused at this mission.
   "It is transporting stolen and illegal items, and these guys that are transporting these items are escaped convics that need to either head back to their own town or die. We will not be mercyful, we will kill them," Dragon commanded, getting ready to go. It was Thursday, this trip is 6hrs to get there, and 6hrs to get back.
   "I see now, ok I'm set," Icy stated, following everyone else out the door and off to the mission.
   They all went off to Bandit Valley to stop the convics. When they got close enough to see the transport truck I stopped them.
   "We need bait, and we also need a plan, other than going down there and killing them," I explained, they all sat and started to think, and fast.
   "I will become a girl and distract them, then we surround them, and tell them to tell us what they are transporting, THEN kill them," Sengi suggested, the others nodded in agreement.
   "Good plan, let's get started then," I ordered and the plan went into action.
   Sengi morphed into a very attarctive women and went down into the way of the transport truck, everyone else went down and surrounded the area.
   "Hey, stop the truck!" one of the convis called out. The truck stopped, right in front of Sengi.
   "Oh, dear, oh deary me. Where did it go?" Sengi started to mutter, he was pacing around pretending to look for something.
   "Hey, get out of the road!" The bigger looking convic yelled at Sengi.
   "Bruce, stop that. She needs help, let's help her," the smaller one said, getting out of the truck.
   "I hate you, you know that Will," Bruce sighed, parking the truck and leaving it as well.
   "Miss, what are you looking for?" Will asked Sengi.
   "My necklace, I dropped it, and now I can't find it," Sengi replied, watching me stealthily sneak into the back of the truck.
   "What does it look like?" Will asked, now sounding concerned.
   "Like this," Sengi said, morphing into a giant dragon and tailwhipped Bruce into the side of the canyon.
   "A trap!" Will yelled, rushing back to the truck.
   "Don't even," I growled, clones of me all around the truck, "Even you can't hurt me, because you don't know which one is the real one."
   "He might not, but I do," a cloaked figure said, emerging out of the shadows.
   "Kill the convics, now!" I yelled, two of my clones went off to attack the cloaked figure.
   "Hnhnhn, my pleasure," Cretateal chuckled, rushing at Will first, claws at the ready.
   "Noo, please not me! AHHHHHHH!!" Will screamed. Cretateal slashed his throat, blood splirting everywhere. Cretateal laughed and continued to slash at the dead body, then turned to Bruce with an evil smile.
   "No, leave me alone you mutant!" Bruce yelled at Cretateal. Then something just switched on in Cretateal.
   "I wouldn't have done that if I were you," I chuckled, evil sounding in the chuckle.
   "Why not?" Bruce asked, sounding worried.
   "I made his medication, and he HATES it when someone calls him a 'mutant'. So in other words, you're so dead," I explained. My two clones disappered, so I sent four after the cloaked figure.
   "Crap," Bruce muttered.
   "DIE!!!" Cretateal yelled, slashing off the guys arms and ears.
   "AAAAHHHHH!!!" Bruce yelled at the pain.
   "You will tell me what is in the truck," Cretateal growled, cutting out one of Bruce's eyes.
   "It's drugs, like crack, and stolen jewelry. Now leave me alone," Bruce spluttered.
   "Not after what you called me," Cretateal said, decapitating the guy.
   "Wow, nice team you got here Roe," the cloaked figure said defeating the four clones.
   "NO ONE EVER CALLS ME THAT!!" I growled out. I then rushed out myself and attacked him with five clones by my side.
   "Except for Danta?" the cloaked figure asked, defeating the clones, but couldn't defeat me.
   "Damn straight!" I yelled at the cloaked figure, kicking him in the shins, then went to punch him in the face, but he blocked it.
   "Well, then I might have to say that I'm Danta, because I am," Danta said, backflipping backwords and removed his hood.
   "D...Danta?" I stuttered, stopping my attack.
   "Yep, now why didn't you visit me yet?" Danta asked, giving me a playful smile.
   "I'm on the job, silly," I giggled. Tentigetska looked worried at this.
   "Oh, well that makes sense. So what do you plan to do now that you have the truck?" Danta asked, standing beside me with his arm around my waist.
   "I plan to destroy it so no one will ever know it was here," I explained, not noticing that Danta's arm was around my waist.
   "Well then, can I help you?" Danta asked, his nose only an inch away from mine.
   "Sure, and just so you know, I like someone already," I told Danta with giggles.
   "Really!? Now I have to know this," Danta smirked, I had walked off to the truck to blow it up.
   "Not now, I'm on the job, and my entire team is here. I don't need them to know about my personal life, like really," I told Danta, setting magic bombs all around the truck.
   "Are those magic bombs?" Danta asked worried.
   "Yeppers, now get down!" I yelled out so my team could hear it.
   "Oh well that's great, no one will EVER know a truck was here after an EXPLOTION!!" Danta yelled as the truck blew up.
   "Shut up, I need to head off home. I'm done the mission, the truck is in ashes and the convics are dead," I said, waving for my team to get ready to leave.
   "Not yet, you need to visit your hometown before you leaves me," Danta pouted.
   "This is your hometown?" Flames asked, looking surprised.
   "Danta!" I growled.
   "Sorry, but you shouldn't be ashamed of your roots," Danta retorted.
   "Yeah, this is my hometown," I sighed, a small playful smile on my features.
   "Sweet," Everyone said, in awe.
   "We can look around, but we do have a long journey home," I explained as we headed off to Huntston.
   "Understood!" my team yelled as they wandered around town.

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And there you have it, my fifth chapter that took me oh-so-long. I am proud of this chapter. I finally got it on my downstairs computer, yeays! So please comment and read and such, just no bad hateful stuff.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #12 on: November 17, 2007, 08:08:30 PM »
ok, sorry for the delay, but here it is, the sixth chapter. enjoy!
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Welcome to Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter six
The Dragon's Den

   "So this is where you lived," Tentigetska stated as he walked by my side.
   "Yeah, I'm a bit proud of this place," I explained, not wanting to relive the past.
   "Well, you should be proud of where you use to live. After all, it will always be your hometown," Tentigetska explained, I just smiled a little bit. He was right, it always will be, and I should be damn glad of it.
   "Rose! We need to talk," Danta called, rushing over to me.
   "About what!?" I asked as Danta dragged me away.
   "In privite," Danta told me, dragging me off to his house.
   Once he dragged me into his home, he closed and locked his front door.
   "Ok, now spill it," Danta demanded as he sat down on his couch.
   "What?" I asked, completely confused, I didn't remember what he wanted me to tell him. Silly me, it isn't like I 'forgot' on purpose.
   "Who do you have a crush on!? You said you wouldn't tell me because your team was around. Now that we are in private, you can tell me," Danta explained impatiently.
   "Oh, right. Well you have no right to know either," I scoulded, knowing full well that he truely didn't need to know.
   "I've been your best friend for years! You have to tell me!" Danta yelled, standing up. You know, he might have a point there.
   "No, now I should be going..." I started but Danta grabbed my arm.
   "Tell me or I guess," Danta threatened. I hate it when he does that.
   "Tentigetska, the one with the black wings," I whispered blushing.
   "No way! I like him to," Danta said with a wicked smile.
   "You're kidding me," I asked, in total disbelief.
   "I'm sooo not!" Danta pouted.
   "I truely love him, even though we do fight, and disagree. I really do love him, but I can't tell him," I sighed, a slight pout appearing on my features.
   "And why can't you tell him?" Danta asked, now courious.
   "Because then he could get distracted and put the team at risk," I explained, Danta realized this as I said it.
   "Oh, well what if I tell him for you?" Danta asked, he just wanted to talk to Tentigetska.
   "No! As I said he could get distracted on a mission," I scoulded, mad at Danta for being so nosey.
   "Aww, come on. If you tell him, he might treat you better," Danta started to explain.
   "We're not going out, Danta! We are just friends and until I decide to quit as team leader, than he and I can go out," I explained, mad at Danta for being really nosey.
   "Excuses, excuses, excuses. You don't want to because you're chicken," Danta smirked.
   "I'm soo not! I can tell him whenever I want, but I know I shouldn't," I growled out.
   "Ok, so why not tell him now?" Danta asked, taking hold of my hand.
   "Because I like another guy too." It slipped out.
   "What?!" Danta was not thrilled.
   "Oops." I didn't plan to repeat it.
   "Tell me now, or I find out the hard way." He wasn't fooling around anymore.
   "I like someone else." I couldn't hold it from him.
   "Who?!" What a nosey boy.
   "Kalasky." He didn't know who he was.
   "Why didn't you tell me that!?" The guilt trip begins.
   "Because you're a nosey pest!" That just slipped out as well.
   "Wh..what?" Oops.
   "I'm sorry, Danta I didn't mean.." I tried to explain.
   "No, no, I get it. I'll leave you alone. Please leave." Shit.
   "Danta..."
   "Now, go."
   "Sorry," I whispered, leaving his house.
   I wandered around town, looking around to see if I could leave without being noticed. My team was looking around everywhere else. But I couldn't find Tenti.
   'I should go, this is why I never come back. I mess something up, so I leave. That's how I live. I run from all my problems, or I kill it,' I thought as I started to leave the city.
   "Well, look who's leaving without the rest of us," Tentigetska stated, appearing in front of me.
   "Get the others, we're leaving," I ordered.
   "What? Why?" Tentigetska asked. Mistake number one.
   "Now!" I demanded, not looking all to thrilled.
   "Ok, going," Tentigetska replied, getting the others.
   "God, some people have to ask so many questions," I mumbled, now waiting for my team to show up.
   "Ok, I got them, I guess we can leave now," Tentigetska replied, knowing that I was in a bad mood and it only takes 3 mistakes to get me into my full killing mode.
   "Then lets go," I muttered, running off.
   By the time we got back to Slasherville, it was 10:30 pm. I went right home, not to Headquarters, and went to my ground yard and took out all of my anger. Doing so caused a lot of damage to the other trees, so before I went to my home, I fixed my surrounding area.
   "Good work team...where's Dragon?" Leader asked, now taking a good look at the team.
   "She went home to vent," Tentigetska replied. I guess he knows me quite well.
   "Oh, I see, well tell her she did a good job tonight," Leader responded, having them leave.
   "Damn, I have to talk to someone," I growled at myself when I got inside.
   *Ring, ring*
   "MM? Hello?" Tentigetska answered, not looking at the caller ID.
   "Hey, it's me," I repiled, he could tell that I was in a bad mood and that I was exhausted.
   "Oh, hey. What's wrong?"
   "Well, I choose where to go for my mission and then I got spotted by a childhood friend, then we were talking then I kind of told him off, and now I think he hates me." I started to tear up.
   "Wow, that's a lot of information for me to swallow." He's just registering that is was me. He's very tired.
   "Ok, I can wait for you to respond, I'm feeling kind of down anyway." I truely was.
   "Ok, I'll try not to be too long." He started to rememeber what I had just blurted out.
   "Ok." I started my waiting.
   'So he was a childhood friend, they talked, she told him off. Probably to but out of her life or something. Then now she thinks he hates her, why would that be?' Tentigetska thought.
   "Ok, what did you two talk about?" He needed some answers to his questions before he could give me advice.
   "Ok, well he asked me who I love, I told him Tentigetska. Then he wanted me to tell him, but I told him I couldn't or he could get distracted. Then he wanted to tell Tenti because he thought I was chicken to tell him then I told him no. He asked me why then I kind of told him that I like someone else. He asked me who then I told him that I like you, he was mad and asked me why I never told him then I told him that he is a nosey pest. And now I think he hates me." It all just came out.
   "Whoa, well maybe you should explain all of this in either a phone call, a letter, or tell him in person the reason you called him that, then say sorry for calling him that and that you only called him that for whatever reason you called him that. Like out of anger or that you were annoyed or something. Ok?" He is such a big help to me.
   "Thank you, I will. Now I don't feel as bad. Are we still a go for tomorrow?" I asked, feeling a bit better.
   "Of course, at 3 pm again at the same coffee shop?" Tentigetska responded.
   "Of course, I'll be ready." I then hung up.
   "Time to call in my professionals," Tentigetska told himself as he hung up after me, then dialed Roy's number.
   "Errrr, can't you call in the morning like normal people," Roy mumbled, half asleep.
   "Sorry, but I will need your help for tomorrow at around noonish," Tentigetska explained, not telling him what I told him.
   "Fine, done, now are you going to leave me alone?" Roy mumbled, now really annoyed.
   "Yes fine, go to sleep now," Tentigetska said and hung up.

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There you have it, that is my sixth chapter. I left you hanging, sorta. Please read and comment. My computer kinda messed up and deleted what I had started for chapter seven, so it may be a bit longer than I thought for chapter seven to come out. Sorry everyone.
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« Reply #13 on: February 26, 2008, 10:32:20 AM »
A bit? You haven't posted in freaking months! Post the FREAKING SEVENTH CHAPTER! I want to read it.
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« Reply #14 on: February 27, 2008, 03:18:01 PM »
I'm still working on it! And nice signiture by the way.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #15 on: March 19, 2008, 04:19:32 PM »
ok so here it is, the oh so very long awaited SEVENTH CHAPTER!!
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warning: apologies, crying, Kleenex, blood, character abuse, name calling, confession, and secret surprise!

Welcome to Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter seven
The lunch date

The next morning I went to the coffee shop so I could build the courage to tell Danta my apology.  Then I heard footsteps and looked up.
"Danta?!" I gasped. I must say, this is one of the only times I've been surprised to notice someone.
"Hey there," Danta said as he sat down.
"Hey there, to you," I responded, looking away, a bit embarrassed.
"I think we need to talk," Danta said, getting a cup of coffee.
"Sure, I know what it's about to, it's about my actions the other day," I said, now looking back up at him.
"Yeah, kinda. And about mine as well," Danta responded, stirring his coffee.
"Can I go first?" I asked, knowing that Danta wanted to talk first, but I wanted to explain everything before he apologized for the wrong things.
"Sure," Danta replied, taking a sip of his coffee.
"Ok, I'm sorry for calling you a nosey pest. I didn't mean to call you that, it just came out because you were asking me all these questions and I was really annoyed at the amount of questions you were asking me. I'm sorry." *tears* *sip*
"Forgiven. Now, I'm sorry for asking you all those questions, I just thought that maybe we should talk when you got to town. I forgot you were on the job and that I shouldn't ask about your personal life, that is wrong. I'm sorry for being such a jerkbag." *Hands me Kleenex* *sip*
"Thanks.*wipes eyes with Kleenex* So are we good again?" *sip*
"Yeah, were good, you look really beautiful," Danta told me, *sip*, he didn't give me a chance to ask why he came here.
"Thanks, I'm meeting someone here at 3 pm." I finished my coffee and just sat there.
"Which one?" Danta asked me, he knew it had to be one of the guys I talked about the other day.
"Kalasky," I replied standing.
"Have fun," Danta said, he got up to leave.
"Danta..." I don't know why I did it, I just had a feeling.
"Yeah?"
"Do you want to met him?" I asked, but hoped he would refuse.
"Sure, I'll be here. Promise." He smiled and winked, then he left.
"Kay," I said with a small smile, I left to wander.
I was walking around the park when I heard someone.
"Hey! Where do you think your going? Come on Mr. Flamy Pants, tell us!"
'Mr. Flamy Pants?.....Kalasky!' I rushed over, my wings grew and my tail flared up.
"I can't hurt you kids, so just leave me be."
"Well Buck here heard that you were rich."
"He's..."
"Shut up!" the kid punched him, hard.
"Stop it, someone might..."
"Cranem told you to shut up!" another punch, a black eye for sure.
"You little boys should stop picking on someone who has friends in high places," I smirked. I was hidden in the trees, with shadow clones.
"Says who?" the one called Cranem asked, looking around, scared.
"Me!" I growled, jumping out of the trees with my shadow clones.
"Run! He has back up!" Cranem shouted, they scattered.
"What are you doing here?" I asked, giving a hand to help Kalasky up.
"Looking for roses," he responded. His bottom lip was bleeding, he did have a black eye, his arms were bleeding and his shirt was ripped to expose his bleeding chest.
"Aww, you didn't have to." I said with a smile.
"For a smile that melts my heart, I would do anything," Tentigetska said, now standing.
"Even let little kids beat you down? Why didn't you do anything?" I asked, leading him to my house.        2 pm.
"I can't hurt little kids or physically hurt women. It's just in me to not harm them," Tentigetska said, looking down.
"Awww, how sweet. Well let's get you cleaned up," I said, noticing a slight bend in his left wing.
"Thanks," Tentigetska said with a light blush.

2:10 pm...

"You have to, how am I to clean you up if you don't?" I explained. Tentigetska (I knew this persona as Kalasky) refused to remove his torn shirt.
" We just met and your asking me to remove my clothes?" Tentigetska joked.
"It's to help clean you up, and its torn!" I said, blushing at his statement.
"Fine." With that the shirt went to the floor.
"...wow." I stated quietly, blushing a bit more. I then started to heal him.
'This is wrong, I can't lie to her any more. I will most certainly get caught, I have to tell her the truth...' Tentigetska closed his eyes, stood very still, then the illusion started to fade. Moments later...
"The hell!!" I shouted, jumping back a few feet.
'Thought so,' "Rose please understand..."
"What the hell did you think you were doing!?"
"Getting to know you better..."
"That's a lame and weak excuse!"
"I know..."
"But it was sweet...in a way."
"Really?"
"Really, but why?"
"Why what?" *slight confused expression*
"Why the fake persona?"
"You were mad at Tentigetska that I thought that when you got the letter knowing it was me that you would be pissed off at me."
"Only a little."
"Not helping!"
"I know, but you didn't have to drag it on with me as him."
"Sorry..."
"Don't be, I don't mind."
"Really?"
"Really."
"So...about the coffee shop..."
"You need to become him once more for me, cause Kalasky needs to meet Danta."
"Done."
After we explained why to Roy he agreed, and after that, me and Tentigetska went to the coffee shop.

3:25 pm...

"Well look who's late," Danta smirked sipping his coffee.
"Sorry, a situation came up and we needed to get it fixed," I explained.
"No need the excuses Roe, Tenti," Danta smiled, sipping his coffee again.
"You knew! But we JUST got here!" I shouted.
"It's obviously Tenti, the wings, the face, the smile. I pick up on these things you know," Danta said getting up.
"Wow, your good," Tentigetska said. I had to hand it to Danta, he knows his men.
"Damn straight, now you two enjoy your coffee, I'm going home," Danta smiled, and left.
"Well then, that was pointless," I sighed, sitting down.
"He knows me so well, why is that?" Tentigetska wondered out loud, becoming him on his own.
"Easy, he's gay," I smirked, looking at his reaction.
"Really?" Tentigetska asked, looking ever so shocked.
"Oh yeah. He liked you as well." I smiled as his shock became greater.

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Now you know more about my character's! And now Rose knows who her phone buddy was! I'm super happy about this one. Another sorta cliff hanger! Read and comment please! Oh and a warning in advance, the next chapter may take me forever, so bare with me, ok.
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Re: Welcome to Slasherville
« Reply #16 on: April 19, 2008, 11:28:58 AM »
While I'm still awake and it is done, the final chapter! Chapter Eight.
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warning: confusion, confessions, a new couple, back to the bar, drunks, happiness, and kissing.



Welcome To Slasherville
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter Eight
The New Couple
   "So he was...and he liked...whoa," Tentigetska  mumbled out when we got back to my house.
   "Yeah, but it's ok. Thank you for the perfect night," I said my arms wrapping around him.
   "I knew you would like it," Tenti said, holding me close.
   "I love you Tentigetska. Be my love forever," I said kissing him on the cheek.
   "Really? After all the shit I've done and said? You want me anyway?" Tenti asked, confused, but pleased at the same time.
   "Yes, I love you so much. You're cute, smart, strong, talented, fast, warm, and you have a smile that could make any girl faint. Please, say yes," I explained, holding him a bit tighter.
   "Yes, I will. You have a smile that makes me melt on the inside, you're smart, logical, beautiful, faster, strong, warm, soft, and you look even more beautiful in the moon's glow," Tenti said. He then kissed me on the cheek.
   "Thank you. This is an even bigger reason to stay alive out in the field, so don't die on me, ok?" I told him, leading him to my room.
   "Of course," Tenti replied, laying down on the bed beside me.
   "Good night," I mumbled before falling asleep.

The next morning...

   "So you got together with her last night? About time!" Roy said, smiling as his arm was around Ugenity.
   "What a joyous day! Our leader, finally, got together with the one she loves!" Sam cheered, a bit drunk.
   "I know, it is beautiful," Fox said, everyone just nodded and smiled.
   "Here's a toast, to the newest couple in the group!" Icy called.
   "Here's!" everyone called, clinging glasses together.
   "Thanks everyone, but we all knew it would happen," I said, smiling and blushing, in Tenti's arms.
   "Well of course we knew, we just waited and wondered when!" Reggie said smiling. Cretateal just giggled.
   "Well thank you, things will be a little different now," I said, everyone just giggled or snickered, "What?"
   "There will be no difference for us, it would be just a bit more fun, since you will be covering Tenti's as.."
   "Hey!" Tenti growled at Matt.
   "It's true," Matt chuckled.
   "Well, it's a nice bum," I smirked, "I wouldn't mind covering that."
   "Not helping!" Tenti said blushing.
   "You're so cute when you blush," I smiled and then I kissed him on the lips.
   "Awwww.." everyone said as they watched us.
   "Here's to life as one!" I called, everyone put up their glasses.
   "Cheers!"

   Their new life begins, and their old lives fade to memories, until the sequel, this is the end.

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I know, it's horribly good, it's all over! This story is finished, until the sequel! Wahahahahahahahahahahaha! And that, that would be a very VERY long time from now. But I hope everyone liked it!
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