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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #165 on: July 01, 2008, 07:59:16 PM »

And what a nice Necropost it is

Kind of reminds me of an Anime too <_<

Hehehe...t'is good my friend ^_^
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #166 on: July 02, 2008, 08:06:45 PM »
heheh, yeah i had a feeling that it was leading to that last sentence.

Is that similar to dialogue from that one anime you are thinking of?
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #167 on: July 03, 2008, 05:57:15 PM »
no...
Koi Kaze is more like...
Brother and Sister love eachother and sister likes it but Brother is all like "ahhh I'm so perverted" but the sister keeps doing things to make the brother feel better.

Thanks, guys ^^
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #168 on: July 05, 2008, 04:28:49 PM »
僕は妹に恋をする (Boku wa Imōto ni Koi o Suru, "I Love My Little Sister" in English) is similar to that too. It's about a teen and his twin sister. The brother is forceful at first, and there's a scene very similar to what you've written there, complete with tears by the sister and the brother confessing up.
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #169 on: July 17, 2008, 12:11:03 PM »
(This is Alex)
Boku wa Imoto ni koi wo suru is what got me into incest anime in the first place =D
Points to HD. <3
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #170 on: July 19, 2008, 11:49:53 PM »
(This is Alex)
Boku wa Imoto ni koi wo suru is what got me into incest anime in the first place =D
Points to HD. <3
This post disturbs me for several reasons:
1) That Pillow is possesing Nyghtwynd.
2) That I got my prediction right.
3) 僕は妹に恋をする (written in Japanese to save the space I'm wasting now) in general.
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #171 on: July 24, 2008, 07:07:06 PM »
I'm going to write anything that comes to my mind..
Mainly the fact that I totally hate you keeps coming back! And when I say "hate", I actually mean "utterly adore", or "totally love" or any other phrase that can fit.
but nevertheless, no phrase can describe
just how much
I f***ing love you.
I didn't mean to, honestly.
I tried to keep all my feelings away from myself, tried to just be calm about this, but every time I look at you, or talk to you on MSN, I get this irrepressible (sp?) feeling that creeps out from my heart and infects my brain like an incurable disease.
It takes away all my boundaries and I type out "I LOVE YOU" in my msn thing but I never press enter.
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Bawwww.
« Reply #172 on: September 25, 2008, 06:34:46 PM »
EDIT: BY THA WAY~
I handed this in, and I got an A+ >w< It also made my teacher AND a classmate cry~
I got da powah =3=



Yeah, Caramelldansen has NOTHING to do with this at all. It's just what I'm listening to at the momenth.

Here is a sappy story I wrote for English class. Which reminds me, I need to email it to my teacher.
Points if you know what happened, why they got blowed up.

"The End of Our World As We Know It"

It was a normal day, as far as normal days go. I had done everything according to my daily schedule. Wake up, shower, say good morning to Rei, eat, and the two of us head to school. We walked hand in hand as usual, not saying a word, just taking in the beauty of the morning. It was 7:15 when we arrived at the our school/ And as usual, we headed for the music room. Rei made herself comfortable in front of the piano. I took my cello out of its case and sat down on the edge of the piano bench.
   "What would you like to play today, Shinji?" Rei asked me. "Hmm..." I thought for a moment. "How about the Canon in D? We haven't played that for a while." Rei smiled, and gestured for me to begin. I pulled the bow back on the first F of the slow progression. Rei joined me after the first measure, her slender fingers slowly depressing the ivory keys. As we reached the fifth phrase, the melody began to pick up. Rei's fingers flew in response to my full quarter notes. She played the eighths and sixteenths with such ease and delicacy and I was reminded of how much I love her. I looked up from my cello to take a look at my fiances face as she plaed. While her hands danced across the piano, her eyes were closed softly, and her lips pursed together ever so slightly, as if she was delivering a kiss to the gentlest of flowers. We entered the last phrase, and our playing slowed, then ceased. We were silent for a few moments, and then Rei turned to me.
   "Shinji, dearest, you were a little flat in measure 42." I narrowed my eyes at her for a second. "I was distracted, of course, by that ridiculous face you make when you play."
   "Shinji! You shouldn't stare at me! It's not polite!" Rei exclaimed, as she attempted to hide her laughter. I smiled and took the giggling girl into my arms. "Rei, I-"
   My sentence was cut off by the loudest explosion I had ever heard. A bright light entered through the window, and a tremor shook the school. I couldn't hear or see, and the only thing I could feel was Rei clinging to me and the floor falling away from us. I felt a great warmth spread through me as I landed on the floor below us. Rei slipped from my grasp momentarily, and almost descended to the bottom of the hole opening up in front of me. I grabbed her hands, and felt the tug of her weight try and drag me down with her. A wave of great pain and heat spread over me, and I heard the other people in the bulding scream, and cry out to others. Rei and I were silent. We held eachothers hands, and eachothers gaze. We didn't need to cry, our fears were clearly shown in our eyes.
   "Shinji..." she choked. Dust had filled her mouth. She coughed, and her whole body shook in my hands. "Don't speak, Rei. I'll help you up." I tried to pull her, but my hands trembled as I tugged hers. Rei's right hand slipped away from me, and I felt her weight drag me toward the edge. "Rei, don't worry. I'll hold on until help arrives." I gazed beyond her, and into the void beneath us. If I dropped her, she wouldn't not live to see tomorrows sunrise.
   I could feel the tears caressing my cheeks and the realization set in. Rei smiled, with tears in her own eyes, and said, "Shinji...It's alright. I'll see you again, someday soon." I reached my other arm out towards her. "No, Rei. We'll get you out of here. Come on, give me your hand." She blinked as if to shake her head. "You're arm is broken...can you not feel it? Try to move it..."
   I tried to move my left arm, and it raised slightly, but it was quite limp. A stab of pain shot through me, but it went unnoticed. "Okay, Rei, grab onto my rig-"
   "Shinji...." she said softly, over the crumbling building around us, and the screams for help ringing through the wreckage. "Listen, Shinji, it'll be fine. I'll be fine."
"No, Rei, it's a 6 story fall...you can't...You won't.."
"I know."
"I'm not letting you go."
Rei squeezed my hand with the last of her strength, and I could feel the sharp edges of her diamond ring press into my palm. As her hand slid out of mine, it diamond stratched through my skin, drawing a bloody line across my hand, and down one of my fingers. I saw her relax her hand, and fall away from me.
"Rei!!!" I screamed her name and pushed myself off the remains of the floor I was on, and dived through the thick air after her. My arms caught her shoulders, and I wrapped them around her, the two of us falling fast, so fast. "Rei, I love you!" I tumbled in the air, and I was falling backfirst, Rei laying on top of me. The last thing I saw before I closed my eyes was her soft brown eyes, and instead of sadness or fear, it was the happiest I had ever seen her, and a beautiful smile lit her face. I returned her smile and held her closer. The feeling of being complete was so overwhelming, I never even felt us hit the ground.
***
"Shinji...Shinji..."
I could hear Rei's voice calling to me...
"Shinji...come on."
I opened my eyes, and saw Rei standing above me, bathed in a beautiful light. "Rei...where are we." I asked. Rei looked off in the distance for a moment, then turned to me and smiled. "Come on Shinji...they're waiting for us." She extended her hand, and helped me up. Together, hand in hand as always, we walked into the light.
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #173 on: October 07, 2008, 10:00:36 PM »

Notices the pink text edit ^^

NICELY done my friend :)
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - Necropost.
« Reply #174 on: October 12, 2008, 01:52:23 AM »
I want to smile.
I want to seize the day as if I am the sole owner of it
I want the sun to rise simply to light MY path in this world
I want endless knowledge of the world and its workings
I want the power of an iron fist, and the emotions of a young child mixed with an elderly person
I want to be able to stop time because the moment is right
So I could make my happiness be eternal, and I'll never have to frown
I want the rain to pour over me and not have anything scold me and tell me to get back inside.
I want to run away from the bindings that are keeping me here, run free and blind into the world and let it pick me up and carry me wherever fate wants me to go
I want to melt in through a mirror, to a world where everything is different, so I can see first hand that this life is better and this life is worth living
I want my mind to stop telling me the things I hate hearing,  I want the voices that clutter it up like a train station to leave me alone for just one day.
I want my phobias to dissolve, my philias to become normal, my bad habits to cease and reform as good ones.
I want to float away from my own body, to look down upon myself and the souls around me. I want to detach myself from the ones I love and care about so I do not get to attached, so I cannot feel more certain pain in the future.
I want to be able to close my eyes and listen to my heart pulsing away inside of me, and to be relaxed within myself.
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - jfdskljfkldggvn.
« Reply #175 on: October 12, 2008, 02:23:45 PM »

WOW...how totally human of thee  :P
But seriously, you put a lot of emotion and honesty into that I can tell. Nicely worded my friend ^^
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - jfdskljfkldggvn.
« Reply #176 on: October 20, 2008, 06:28:37 PM »
-sighs and smiles-

Two things for you guys. Written for..well...some of you know, some of you don't.

Before, my world was shadows
A thousand shades of grey
I'd lie in bed
Filled with dread
About the coming day

I had no reason to rise
Or motivation to live
I'd not take the hand
Of any in this land
I had no love in me to give.

But then the sun peeked out
From behind his hiding place
I looked up to the sky
And reached up high
Warm rays lighting my face

At last the day has come
I finally know what to do
I will risk it all
Let go, and fall
To fly through this world with you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

You are a phoenix, the symbol of forever. Of life, and rebirth. You lifted me out of the ashes and breathed life into my weakened heart. Allowing me to hang onto you, you flew me away from the shadows that plagued me, that ate at me, and that blinded me from the world. We travelled many miles in seconds, yet those seconds felt like years. You shelter me with your soft wings, keeping the evils of the world away, protecting me like you promised.
In this gallery of red and gold, I reflect on the moments we've shared, and paint pictures of the future with my own soul as the ink. The lines stretch from heart to canvas to heart. I will continue the lines, extending them through you and into eternity, where we, and our love, will sing.
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - jfdskljfkldggvn.
« Reply #177 on: October 20, 2008, 07:08:33 PM »
Very nice ^^

A slight typo perhaps though?

But then the sun peek out.

Peeked maybe?
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - jfdskljfkldggvn.
« Reply #178 on: October 20, 2008, 07:10:29 PM »
What typo >_>
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Re: Alex's Writing Thread - jfdskljfkldggvn.
« Reply #179 on: October 20, 2008, 07:11:28 PM »

Ooops...my bad <_<
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