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Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« on: November 22, 2007, 05:22:32 PM »
Hi ya'll... So I figured it was high time that I started posting my stories and poems for you to see and hopefully critique (but not too meanly  ;)) I honestly hope that you enjoy what I have to say and I look forward to reading what you have to say.
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2007, 05:24:58 PM »
Fallen Angel

He sat on the crumbling edge, feet dangling into space. Hunchbacked in his coat, one hand resting in the dirt the other propping his chin up, his eyes remained closed as he heard footsteps behind him. He cracked a lid enough to see a set of small feet come to a stop beside him.

"How are you?" She asked

"I'm upset and angry, but you knew that," He replied sharply.

"I know but I thought it would be nice to ask. Considerate, but right now that word isn't even in your vocabulary, huh?"

"I just know that there is something else I can do, something more I need to do and I just don't have enough time."

She sat next to the man, his large to her small, his light to her dark. He looked over at her, a tiny dark haired girl. She looked so small to him, dressed in black and red, and she likewise had a black coat that was beginning to make her look hunched.

"So what's going to happen now?" he asked.

"For you, nothing, you don't need to fight anymore. It's my turn."

She stood and began to walk away from him farther down the cliff edge. He began to stand up and all of a sudden he was falling. The coat fell off and beneath it laid a pair of wings, made of light and joy and happiness. They snapped out but they couldn't stop his fall. Wondering why as the ground came closer and closer he heard her whisper: Because of your anger, and your lack of faith in me. I will see you again soon. Be safe, my Angel.


This is just a jumping off point for a story that's rolling around in my brain... more to be added later
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Re: Poems and Stories by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #2 on: November 23, 2007, 02:05:04 AM »
mmhmm the part with the wings was a little vague, maybe you should adda little more detail?
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #3 on: November 23, 2007, 03:08:29 AM »
mmhmm the part with the wings was a little vague, maybe you should adda little more detail?

The idea was to be a little vague because it shall be explained in the story.. but how exactly are you defining vague here?
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2007, 03:25:20 AM »
So I'm posting a series of poems I wrote about two years ago or so.... I had no idea I was so emo though...  :-\

2.1.2005
Poetic symphony

She sang a poetic symphony
Then whispered in my ear
All sodden eyes caked in blurry tears
She gazed at me with her fanciful imagination
She gave me wings that raised me up
She gave me power that made me strong
I clung to her like a fearful child
Terrified that she would leave me behind
Her interminable beauty
The sway she had over all and yet the oblivion of her freedom
She did not see herself drifting away
I gazed at her with sodden eyes caked in blurry tears
The pallor of death set within her skin
Her interminable beauty enhanced by that pallor
Asleep
She slept and dreamt priceless dreams
She knew our darkest secrets and our deepest desires
And still she slept
Her beauty fading away like a scent on the wind
Fleeting, yet powerful enough to move mountains
As the beauty faded I again heard her whisper
I'll sing a poetic symphony about my winged pet
I'll tell them that she raised me up and carried me away
The power that I gave her set me adrift on the winds of time
And now I see I cling to her, as she once clung to me
She sang in her poetic symphony
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Re: Poems and Stories by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2007, 06:39:14 AM »
I really like that poem. I'm trying to figure out though, if it's from the perspective of Daughter to Mother, ie. Nemesis to Nyx, or from a male perspective.  Either way works well ^^
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #6 on: November 24, 2007, 09:54:22 PM »
His and Hers

His perspective:

I can't take this from you
I don't want this from you
You can't do this to me
You can't control me
This frustration and anger consumes me
I'm sorry
Please don't cry
I can't take this from you
Don't be those phone calls
I don't want this from you
Don't force me to heel
You can't do this to me
You won't make me guilty
YOU CAN'T CONTROL ME

Her perspective:

Tell me what you want from me
Give me anything to do
Keep me busy and by your side
And I'll never hinder you
My poor heart wrapped in your grasp
Crush it if you please
I would end the world with my very hands
To give you what you need

stupid ex's....
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Re: Poems and Stories by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #7 on: November 24, 2007, 10:07:04 PM »
stupid ex's....

Indeed, aren't they all?  Otherwise, they wouldn't be ex's now would they  :P

Very nice.  :)
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To the land of the sun where our journeys begun
All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #8 on: November 26, 2007, 02:11:39 AM »
The idea was to be a little vague because it shall be explained in the story.. but how exactly are you defining vague here?

sorry, late reply. um... vague as in i was a little confused. but that might just be me >.> anyhow nice work with the poems
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #9 on: November 26, 2007, 01:37:41 PM »
So I'm posting a series of poems I wrote about two years ago or so.... I had no idea I was so emo though...  :-\

I did.

Well done nonetheless.
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #10 on: December 19, 2007, 02:19:30 AM »
Another relatively old one... but it was resonating with me over the last few days.

Lost

Lost in the rhythm, the beat, the pulse
Pulls me towards the center
The internal climax of sound
The throbbing heat of the crescendo
It sucks me into it's upward spiral
Engulfs me, caresses me, ravages me
Ripped from one side to the next
An ever-living entity of sound
The pulse wreaks havoc on my heart
The rhythm stops...
Beat
Soft at first
Beat
And rises again
Beat
The final climax of sound, the ultimate crescendo
Beat
Blasted from the here and now
Surrounded in the mind shattering sounds
Then the blissful peace of oblivion
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #11 on: December 19, 2007, 09:30:29 AM »
That's very deep of you. Very nice.

But it helps if you turn the bass down.
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2007, 10:59:55 PM »
Ah, but the bass makes all the difference my friend.

A very nice piece Nemmi ^^ I like it muchly
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #13 on: December 30, 2007, 11:18:23 PM »
My Friend
 
In the heart of a friend beats a shadow of your own
 
A friend who’s shoulder is there when you cry
 
Who cries when she laughs because of your silly antics
 
A friend who will tell you that she loves you even when she’s pissed
 
A friend who knows your mad even though you’re smiling on the outside
 
A friend who is also a sister
 
She will kick your ass when you deserve it
 
She will rub your back when you need it
 
She will give you her love even when you don’t ask for it
 
This friend is more than a friend
 
More like an extension of your self
 
The essence you carry inside is influenced and effected by her
 
You know when she is down because so are you
 
You know when she is happy because so are you
 
You know when she want’s to beat the crap out of someone.. probably because of you
 
She will be in your heart forever



Dedicated to my Nikki
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Re: Musings and Inspirations.. by Nemesis and Night
« Reply #14 on: December 30, 2007, 11:23:17 PM »
Very sweet, beautiful and true.
I love it, Nemmi<3 bring us more lovely writings ^_^
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