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Way Ward Winds
« on: December 07, 2007, 10:37:06 PM »
   "So Alex has finaly arived to this outcast of a town.", a shadowy figure spoke to the basin showing him what ever goes on inthe town below his mountain cave, "I guess i have to deal with him just as my master commanded of me to do. I hope he will acept the fate that has been set for him. I hope he will put up more of a fight than the last.", turnning to pick up his sword, which was beside the basin, as he turned and left the room to anouther one were his bed was, frosted over with a thin layer of ice, "this dame spell with be the death of me, "I will get my master back for that, and just as he did to all those that he hade me do to the ones before." he paused for a few seconds befor he continued, "I will carve hime alive. Well Alex I hope your ready for tommorow's events."
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2007, 12:16:56 AM »
I did this for you, don't take offense or anything, but you had some run-on sentences, and sentences that made no sense. If you want, I can edit anything else you write..


"So Alex has finally arrived to this outcast of a town," A shadowy figure spoke to the basin. It showed what went on in the town below his mountain cave. "I guess I have to deal with him just as my master commanded me to do. I hope he will accept the fate that has been set for him. I hope he will put up more of a fight than the last..." he said as he turned to pick up his sword, which lay beside the basin. He turned and left the room, entering another which housed his bed, which was frosted over with a thin layer of ice.
          "This damn spell will be the death of me. I will get my master back for that. And just as he did to all those before me," he paused for a few seconds before he continued. "I will carve him alive. Well, Alex, I hope you are ready for tomorrows events."
« Last Edit: December 08, 2007, 12:24:32 AM by PurpleHeart »
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2007, 01:58:20 AM »
i don't and kk i will pm u it k... and were u alex on ffq that vanished?
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« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2007, 04:04:21 PM »
Yup, that was me ^___^ Did it take you that long to figure that out? ^^;
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2007, 08:27:59 PM »
the last time i was on i didn't see u purple heart.. then when i did and saw ur pic u have, i instanly thought it was ur style. i didn't say anything at first straight out till i had the chance to ask you. *grins*



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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2007, 10:17:34 PM »
Why didn't you just post? :/
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« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2007, 12:29:11 PM »
rite now i'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes that i make i'm not sure were it is on thins comp.
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2007, 12:48:48 PM »
Quote from: Shadow Spector on December 09, 2007, 12:29:11 PM
rite now i'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes that i make i'm not sure were it is on thins comp.

RIGHT now I'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes I make . I'm not sure where it is on this comp.

Try using MSword, or le gasp a DICTIONARY.
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2007, 03:26:19 PM »
... i have look for a dictionary, and there are none here, i tore apart this place looking for one, and secondly my computer only has wordpad, and note pad....
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2007, 03:29:57 PM »
Quote from: Chevalier-Ange on December 09, 2007, 12:48:48 PM
Right now I'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes I make. I'm not sure WHERE it is on this COMPUTER.

>_>

What can I say...it's contagious  :-\
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #10 on: December 29, 2007, 02:48:14 PM »
  "Welcome home Alex," a female voice called as he left the inn's doorway, "I'm so glad you were not killed in the fight."
  "Who are you exactly?" Alex's words hovered in the air for a few seconds, "If you don't have anything important to say, I have to be on my way."
  "Wait," her voice called to Alex's back, "You can't go to the temple; you have been banned from there." Stopping in mid step, Alex turned around to look at the woman.
  "How can I be banned if this is my first time ever being in this town? As a matter of fact, how do you know my name?"
  "This is your home, you were born and raised here and we were together before you went to war." Pausing a moment to remove a glove from her hand, "You gave me this." She said, holding her hand up in front of Alex's face, "This ring you gave me as a promise to me."
  "I have never seen it before in my life." Alex turned again to leave, "if you must annoy me then you can follow me." As they headed to the temple a blizzard started to stir, and within a few minutes of it starting, they reach the temple, "We're here."
 "Where is here exactly?" She said as a feeling of fear seemed to creep across her.
  "The Temple of Shadows," he said. Looking over at the girl he noticed that her fearful look seemed to melt away, "The temple is a dark place and not everyone can enter it, only those in league with the shadows."
  The two entered the temple, a shadowy figure standing at the back chapel behind a podium, raised its head. "You have done well Mirial; you shall be rewarded for your efforts. And Alex, I have been waiting for you for a long time. Fifty years to be exact."
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #11 on: December 29, 2007, 03:48:18 PM »
No No No!
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #12 on: December 29, 2007, 05:06:35 PM »
no colour i take it.
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #13 on: December 29, 2007, 05:26:17 PM »
Much better ^^
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #14 on: December 29, 2007, 06:33:55 PM »
lol i will post then next part when i'm on the good computer. so it will be easyer with out any lag... stupid viruses...
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