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Way Ward Winds
« on: December 07, 2007, 10:37:06 PM »
   "So Alex has finaly arived to this outcast of a town.", a shadowy figure spoke to the basin showing him what ever goes on inthe town below his mountain cave, "I guess i have to deal with him just as my master commanded of me to do. I hope he will acept the fate that has been set for him. I hope he will put up more of a fight than the last.", turnning to pick up his sword, which was beside the basin, as he turned and left the room to anouther one were his bed was, frosted over with a thin layer of ice, "this dame spell with be the death of me, "I will get my master back for that, and just as he did to all those that he hade me do to the ones before." he paused for a few seconds befor he continued, "I will carve hime alive. Well Alex I hope your ready for tommorow's events."
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2007, 12:16:56 AM »
I did this for you, don't take offense or anything, but you had some run-on sentences, and sentences that made no sense. If you want, I can edit anything else you write..


"So Alex has finally arrived to this outcast of a town," A shadowy figure spoke to the basin. It showed what went on in the town below his mountain cave. "I guess I have to deal with him just as my master commanded me to do. I hope he will accept the fate that has been set for him. I hope he will put up more of a fight than the last..." he said as he turned to pick up his sword, which lay beside the basin. He turned and left the room, entering another which housed his bed, which was frosted over with a thin layer of ice.
          "This damn spell will be the death of me. I will get my master back for that. And just as he did to all those before me," he paused for a few seconds before he continued. "I will carve him alive. Well, Alex, I hope you are ready for tomorrows events."
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2007, 01:58:20 AM »
i don't and kk i will pm u it k... and were u alex on ffq that vanished?
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« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2007, 04:04:21 PM »
Yup, that was me ^___^ Did it take you that long to figure that out? ^^;
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2007, 08:27:59 PM »
the last time i was on i didn't see u purple heart.. then when i did and saw ur pic u have, i instanly thought it was ur style. i didn't say anything at first straight out till i had the chance to ask you. *grins*




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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2007, 10:17:34 PM »
Why didn't you just post? :/
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« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2007, 12:29:11 PM »
rite now i'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes that i make i'm not sure were it is on thins comp.
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2007, 12:48:48 PM »
rite now i'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes that i make i'm not sure were it is on thins comp.

RIGHT now I'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes I make . I'm not sure where it is on this comp.

Try using MSword, or le gasp a DICTIONARY.
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2007, 03:26:19 PM »
... i have look for a dictionary, and there are none here, i tore apart this place looking for one, and secondly my computer only has wordpad, and note pad....
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2007, 03:29:57 PM »
Right now I'm trying to find something to get rid of the spelling mistakes I make. I'm not sure WHERE it is on this COMPUTER.

>_>

What can I say...it's contagious  :-\
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #10 on: December 29, 2007, 02:48:14 PM »
  "Welcome home Alex," a female voice called as he left the inn's doorway, "I'm so glad you were not killed in the fight."
  "Who are you exactly?" Alex's words hovered in the air for a few seconds, "If you don't have anything important to say, I have to be on my way."
  "Wait," her voice called to Alex's back, "You can't go to the temple; you have been banned from there." Stopping in mid step, Alex turned around to look at the woman.
  "How can I be banned if this is my first time ever being in this town? As a matter of fact, how do you know my name?"
  "This is your home, you were born and raised here and we were together before you went to war." Pausing a moment to remove a glove from her hand, "You gave me this." She said, holding her hand up in front of Alex's face, "This ring you gave me as a promise to me."
  "I have never seen it before in my life." Alex turned again to leave, "if you must annoy me then you can follow me." As they headed to the temple a blizzard started to stir, and within a few minutes of it starting, they reach the temple, "We're here."
 "Where is here exactly?" She said as a feeling of fear seemed to creep across her.
  "The Temple of Shadows," he said. Looking over at the girl he noticed that her fearful look seemed to melt away, "The temple is a dark place and not everyone can enter it, only those in league with the shadows."
  The two entered the temple, a shadowy figure standing at the back chapel behind a podium, raised its head. "You have done well Mirial; you shall be rewarded for your efforts. And Alex, I have been waiting for you for a long time. Fifty years to be exact."
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #11 on: December 29, 2007, 03:48:18 PM »
No No No!
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« Reply #12 on: December 29, 2007, 05:06:35 PM »
no colour i take it.
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Re: Way Ward Winds
« Reply #13 on: December 29, 2007, 05:26:17 PM »
Much better ^^
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« Reply #14 on: December 29, 2007, 06:33:55 PM »
lol i will post then next part when i'm on the good computer. so it will be easyer with out any lag... stupid viruses...
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« Reply #15 on: December 31, 2007, 12:59:40 PM »
  "you have been waiting me for fifty years?", Alex voice showed shock and amazement in his tone, "I'm not even -"
   "Quiet now don't rationalize what has been and will be at this moment, all you need to know is what I will teach you."
   "Grandfather you need him to train, in your arts?", Mirial's statement was more of a question than she intended it to be.
   "Yes Mirial he needs to know how to use the power which is harbored inside.", at that moment when he finished his words light erupted from the torches at the sides and pillars scattered through out the room, "Power is one thing to have and it is another to use it responsibly."
   "That is good and all but what in the world is got to do with me?", Alex sock out of curiosity and ignorance, "You have to tell me."
   "I don't have to do anything it is my choice what I want to do.", seeing the reaction in the faces of the two before him, Alex and Mirial, he started his story with out the slight hesitance to inform them what he was doing, "Long time a go me and my brother developed a way to see into the future. With that ability we ended have dispute on how to use our new power.", Paused to take a slight sigh, "He wanted to use it to control the world, and I wanted to prevent the world from being controlled.", seeing the questioning look on Alex's face, "What is it Alex?", his grand doughtier had a look more like oh my god on her face.
   "How would this all relate to me."
   "Grand father how do this have to relate to your brother, Tenh -"
   "Never speak my brother name!", dropping his head he turn his back to them, "needless to say my brother and I couldn't see what we would do in the future so he doesn't know I would talk or help you train but he would know that your here, and he did, so he went and coroneted me about it years ago, and in the struggle he was killed by my hand, so you will not have to worry about him trying to use you in the least bit."
   "Then why can't I speak your brothers name?"
   "if you do he will come back and avenge his death by killing me?"
   "Tenhenik!", pausing for a second and nothing happened for the next bit, "See I told you that is was foolish believing in that silly thing.", At that moment all the lights when out and a few seconds latter when they returned on, Mirial's grandfather laded one the floor headless, and a figure with robed in black, standing over him. The Dagger used to kill dripping with blood over the corps.
   "you were a foolish brother, but since the two of them are dead there is nothing to worry about.", a female voice spoke softly.
   "you killed my grandfather.", tears swelled as she ran over to her dead grand father, "Why did you do that!"
   "My master commanded me to do it, as well I have business with Alex."
   "Hang on one second here, how in the world dose every one know my name!", Alex felt his rage boiling in his vain, At that moment, the shadows them selves seemed to awaken, becoming  human in form but all black, raising up to surround them.
   "Amazing, you already can summon the shadows at that magnitude you truly are the one.", Merrill's answered, taking Alex slightly off guard, "so you must be Tenhenik's heir in a way and I am my grandfathers,"
   "So you must be Mirial, Henials Heir, and I'm Lindia."
   "I will kill you  for what you did!"
   "Haven't there been enough deaths already?" Alex jumped in between them, "Lets all work together unless you want to face them.", the two girls turned and regarded the shadows and stepped and dropped to the ground, Sorry I had to do that but you really need to cool down. If you want me to release you the you will have to agree to work together, and help me with figuring out what needs to be done."
   "We will it is the least we can do for leaving you high and dry.", The two said in unison.
   "That is good news, shall we go deeper where I intended to going the first place?" as the two standing, Alex started to walk deeper into the temple of shadows.
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« Reply #16 on: December 31, 2007, 01:15:48 PM »
Yay! That's soooooo much better. The storyline is not too bad either.  ;D
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« Reply #17 on: December 31, 2007, 05:25:08 PM »
Tank you there,well back to the story.

 Turning to look back Alex noticed that he was alone, "I guess they are working it out by them self even though I had the feeling that they were tying.", Alex spoke aloud to see if he could get an echo out of the corridors, "I guess I'm literally with in the shadows.", Stopping his words when lights seemed to turn on instantly.
   "Why have you disturbed our sacred resting place, Alex.", A craggy voice called out in the newly lit shadows.
    "How do you even know my name?"
    "All the shadows know each other."
    "Are you saying I'm not a human?"
    "Enough of this mindless exchange of words.", The voice pause as the shadows around Alex came alive, "If you want to enter our sanctuary then you must passed the test."
   "I will do anything that need to allow my entrance."
   "So be it you test starts now.", everything went dark, a cold wind seemed to blow freezing Alex in spot.
    Standing up Alex recognized that he was no longer in the temple of shadows were he once was moment before, 'so this is how things happen in this world I see.', Alex continued to walk in the desert waist land, 'for that matter why in this world is the desert so cold when the sun is out?', Just then a dragon appeared scaled in ice, 'I guess that, this explains why it is so cold in the desert.'
   "So your the next one that the shadows chose to handle the ancient tests.", the dragons voice was slow and calculating in its tone, relaxed at the chance to eat the next chosen by the shadows.
   "you can talk.", Regarding his opponent Alex stance harden, and his guard increased, "I know there is no reasoning with you.", 'damn I don't even have a weapon to defend my self and the sun is removing the shadows, so I'm unarmed.'
   "Your are very observant for a human."
   "Two things one the shadows never said I was a human so I don't know what they call me and what exactly in my test they sent me on?"
   "to kill me unarmed without a weapon in your hands.", the dragon laughed.
    "I don't have a weapon or so you think my natural skills will be enough.'
    "what shadows skill can you possibly posses that can harm me a frozen shadow dragon?"
   "So I can never beat you but I can still with this fight, if you can't eat."
   "thinking of binding me with what shadow?'
   "The shadow beneath your very feet."
   "Others before you have tried it and they couldn't beat me."
   "Well I will have to try don't I?", taking a deep breath he continued again, "It is not like I will die for ever I will awaken back in the temple of shadows won't I?"

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   "So were did he go he was right over there, and the he faded into the darkness how can we follow him if we don't know were he went to?", Mirial asked, Lindia.
   "He went into the shadows.", Pausing looking at the expression on Mirial's face, "The only thing we can do for him is lend him our power."
    "I don't think I will let you help him in the least bit.", the craggy voice of the shadow spoke in front of the two girls, " You will have to kill every single shadow in this place and that will be impossible."
   "you don't know me then.", Lindia spoke as she charged a spell.
   "Time to show you what I can do.", Mirial said as she too charged a spell.
   "So you think that you puny magic can cross to the frozen desert and help him kill the dragon that lives there?", the shadows laughed.
   "The frozen dragon is his test no one has ever been able to deal with that one ever there aren't even any shadows that could aid him.", the two girls spoke together.
   "If he is truly the one that can save the worlds the he can do it."
   "Weaponless?"
   "he has a weapon that will be able to kill him after all the shadow fusion he has done her to bind the two of you I have seen any one that could do that with out knowing that they had that ability. Alex unlocked his power with out any help once so ever."
   "So were helpless in helping Alex.", the two said together, and both released there spell fizzing them out.
   "As I though you would.", the shadows laughed yet again, "don't worry you test are coming up soon enough."

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  "Why the hell can you move so fast in the sand?", The dragon road in anger,"Your speed will be nothing compared to my full power.", the dragon went to take a step forward, but his lags wouldn't move, "How did you trap me like this?" the shadows coffin, wrapped its self around the dragon, increasing  speed as the dragon struggled to be freed.
   "Your speed distracted me, so you could trap me, you have passed the test.", the dragon vanished and Alex found him self at the entrance to the shadows temple.
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« Reply #18 on: January 19, 2008, 08:27:35 PM »
sorry... i can't get my thoughts for this story going further than this.
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