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Talon IceHawk

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Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« on: July 10, 2007, 06:45:22 PM »
So, this is my slow sprite thread. Behold.


Turnip, my latest work. I was going for a "me" character, but it didn't happen. Instead we have him. And yes, that's his name.


My ever-slowly growing sheet for The Black Maelstrom (commonly if not only referred to simply as Maelstrom). An old character of mine, probably could use some redesign.


Ayumi Tanaka (on the left) and Roll (on the right). I put them together 'cause I felt like it.

All scratch. My most recent stuff. Any thoughts?
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #1 on: July 10, 2007, 08:42:54 PM »
Usually I'll make a comment, or a critique. I can't sprite well, but I've got a decent eye.

That being said. I have nothing bad to say. Those are excellent.

Except for Turnips left facing pose, if it's supposed to be a mirror, I don't think you should be able to see part of his right fist. :)
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #2 on: July 11, 2007, 01:11:24 PM »
Ah, Ayumi is still one of my favourites of your sprites. n__n She's just so cute
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #3 on: July 19, 2007, 04:15:23 AM »
You're half-right, OwA. You should be able to see it. However, not as much as I have there. I couldn't make it look right in any other position :/

In any case, I recently did this. Kuro Inzen (a friend's character) in my own sprite style (since he did Turnip in his style). Just for fun.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2007, 10:30:16 AM »
My kingdom, my kingdom for a zoom!

Looks...spiky. Nice armor though, shines in all the right places.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2007, 08:38:46 PM »
I've been getting good at shiny lately :D



Unshaded walking animation for Maelstrom. Thoughts?
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #6 on: July 26, 2007, 08:59:07 PM »
Something doesn't look right about the way his legs move.

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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #7 on: July 26, 2007, 10:16:26 PM »
It's almost like he's walking an at the last moment wiping something off the bottom of his foot.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #8 on: July 27, 2007, 01:12:22 AM »
Yeah, what OWA said. His feet flick up too fast.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #9 on: July 27, 2007, 04:03:03 PM »
..Give him a pair of horns and have someone hold up a red blanket XD

Not bad though.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #10 on: July 27, 2007, 10:57:11 PM »
Yeah, what OWA said. His feet flick up too fast.

Too fast but more so too far... people don't walk like that... atleast not if they're even somewhat normal
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2007, 04:24:04 PM »
That is a tremendous amount of shoulder movement.

In fact, it almost looks like he dislocates them each swing back.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #12 on: July 29, 2007, 02:17:49 PM »
His feet kick up too much in the last frame. And as Dan said, lots of shoulder movement.

I'd suggest finding actual photos/realistic drawings of a person walking to get a better idea of the movement instead of guessing.
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Re: Talon Can Has Sprite Thread
« Reply #13 on: July 29, 2007, 04:27:03 PM »
Or, alternatively, finding a full-length mirror and watching yourself walk.

Or just get your brother to walk around for you.

Either would work.
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