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WhiteRoxie

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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #180 on: December 02, 2008, 12:02:59 AM »
This is a house built of mirrors
This is mirror reflecting the light
This is the light shining down

And this is the cloth thrown over the light

Hide the light, hide the light
We are dark, we are dark

We
                are
                                  dark

Light hidden. Throw off the cloth.
Reflect in the light that shines in this house.
This light makes the house

But look, what is that shadow?
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #181 on: December 02, 2008, 06:33:29 PM »

I'm very happy to see you posting again my friend. ^^ And with such a creative post as well. Nice
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To the land of the sun where our journeys begun
All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


Their story shall be told in another time...another place

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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #182 on: December 02, 2008, 06:35:27 PM »
Very nice m'dear.
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WHITEY IS A NECROMANCER OHNOES
« Reply #183 on: March 07, 2009, 07:42:13 AM »
Midnight last night this was the greatest thing I'd ever written. Now I wonder if I should be sharing it with you. This means a kinda something to me so... I don't know... please view it seriously...? Haha...


Premonition Dedication

We are treading glass
Haphazardly
Strewn on the floor.
Little shards slice our soles
(souls?)
Staining the carpet red.
Though it hurts,
We tiptoe.
Don’t make a sound,
Tremble,
-- too late -- they heard.
Glass breaks into pieces;
Splinters to slice up our souls.

She doesn’t see the devil in me that the others see.
Eyes unseeing-- no, she never saw it.


And when the time comes,
I push her away
And take the beating for myself.
She -- hope & faith & purity
-- saw not the beating coming.
I -- cynicism & pessimism
-- am made from tougher stuff
Though
Metal still breaks bone
And shreds skin.
I am down; and
They close my eyes for me.
I still hear her screams.

Unseeing eyes stare ahead --
She was the angel landed by my feet & smiled & took my hand


Her wings -- bloody, broken
She will not fly again --
Match my eyes.
I cannot see her
But in the dark
I hear her cry.
Touching lips, words whispered;
She did not know I was awake.
I did not know I was dreaming.

I tainted like poison
-- transferred lip to lip;
Heart to heart


But they
Did not understand.
Her wings were stronger
Than their metal, and
-- Hands held, lips touched, cheeks kissed--
She soared higher than before
And I -- left behind --
Still horned and blood red in their eyes.
But she
Returned.
And they
Eyes opened.
Mine, she closed
And took my hand; she flew.
Blessed be -- I flew
Shed no blood and glass shoes wore
No broken soles
(souls?)
for we.

I will
Tread softly
And kiss your hands.


Blessed be -- I flew.


Hahaha... looking at it... I wonder what (you/I/she/anyone/everyone) would make of it...
« Last Edit: March 07, 2009, 07:44:59 AM by WhiteRoxie »
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #184 on: March 08, 2009, 12:39:24 AM »
Quoth the angel...

Excellent work.
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #185 on: March 08, 2009, 06:27:41 AM »
Quoth the angel...

Excellent work.

Quothed an angel that?
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #186 on: March 08, 2009, 09:54:55 PM »
Indeed.
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #187 on: March 22, 2009, 02:31:18 AM »
Whitey Blog 2239:

I listened to loud music til my ear bled. Out of nowhere, a giant pin came pierced me straight through the chest. My ribs were crushed and I couldn't breathe. Pinned onto a white board. Exhibit A. I pulled and pulled on the nail. Red spilled out everywhere and I fell through a white void. I woke up here and my chest still hurts. None of this happened, but I dreamt that it did and it happened. Tears built up and I tried not to cry. I'm really losing it. The world is getting further and further away. What happens when it slips through my fingers. Help me. Please help me. Dear God, please help me.
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #188 on: March 22, 2009, 10:41:02 AM »

It's a pity we can not harness the energy the human body creates from frustration and stress. Heh...we'd be able to power the universe with a single thought <_<

Breath deep and breath slow my friend...in time, this to shall pass ^^

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All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


Their story shall be told in another time...another place

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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #189 on: March 23, 2009, 06:02:44 AM »
Untitled.

One winter’s day,
I was early for a date with you.
It was a chilly morning.
Wrapped up in the scarf and glove
I took a walk about the park
To warm up.

My thoughts flitted to you.
My one and only
Yet I questioned what I felt.
Unhappiness welled up
Grey like the gathering clouds.
Then a most miraculous thing happened-

On the icy paths
I met a Feeling.
He had long flowing locks of gold
A loose white shirt
And a daft smile.
He noticed my plight.

He introduced himself
And I myself.
We took a turn around the park
And I related my story.
He silently listened
Floating by my side.

He smiled and blushed coyly
At mention of you.
I found myself smiling and blushing
From the cold.
We finished our walk
At the spot we started.

He lay his hands on my shoulders
And looked me sound in the eye.
“You are lucky, son
To have found me on such a cold day.
Question yourself no longer.”

With another smile he disappeared.

I stood grounded to the spot.
My meeting with a Feeling;
I was sure of my heart now.
Snow began to fall softly softly.
I smiled as you ran to me
Cheeks pink with chill.


I don't know! Don't question my weirdness! D;

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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #190 on: March 23, 2009, 05:39:40 PM »

Hmm...I think for the first time, you've totally got me going "huh" to something you have written. When I started to read this, the beginning had me thinking it was going in a certain direction, alas my friend, the latter part has left me with a slight  :-\

I love the descriptiveness of this without a doubt. As always, you're attention to detail is astounding. I think the genders are what's throwing me off...
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #191 on: March 29, 2009, 06:44:35 AM »
It shouldn't... it's just a fictional poemthing. XD Just because I'm writing doesn't mean I'm writing about me or from my point of view~
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Re: Whitey... And Stuff
« Reply #192 on: March 29, 2009, 09:49:02 AM »

Yes, I realize that :P
...and that's not entirely what I was referring too. However, I think I got it now all the same ^^
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Take me with you, we will fly across the sea
To the land of the sun where our journeys begun
All fear is gone, we sail until the dawn
Deepest fears will burn inside your mind
For the souls lost in endless time


Their story shall be told in another time...another place
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