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Author Topic: Spirit's Wake (didn't know what to name this so i when with what i had written)  (Read 348 times)

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Prologue part one
     "finally arrived.", a young man said, as he looked forward. The small town of Tieannir, in front of him, "More than the predicted  amount of time to travel here.", closing his eye, with a deep breath,"But in the end well worth the wait.", opening his eyes as he proceeded into the town.

     Not one seemed to notice him in the least bit,in fact they seemed to walk rite through hi as if he was none existent, 'It wont matter if I even attempt to converse with them or not. they won't even know I'm here, or even talking to them.', his thoughts lingered in his mind. The moon's rays filtered down onto the village, lighting the darkness, in the dead of night. A summers breeze blew through the town, unhindered by the buildings or the mass of people.





well there is the first bit of my story i want to write and hopefully get published when it is done... though that is all i have written at this time.
I hope every one enjoyed what i do have and sorry that there is not much there.
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well what to say other than never have a relationship, your heart will be broken every time.

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   "This isn't the town  of souls for nothing.", his words seemed to echo in the night. In the center of the town ahead of him, a slight glow radiated forth call him to it, "What do i have to lose?".
   Walking to the fountain, finding tah an inscription was written on a stone slabe, which was perfectly persevered. looking down at the words, he began to read.
   "Only those who have the heart, to cast aside all that are  held close to it will succeed in there quest. The quest to find the ancient blade to be one with the sword of souls. You must first lose hope of finding it and accept that of which is set before you. Dieing in order to reach it's true resting place. only   a soul will be able to reach it's domain.

   Are you young swords man read to face your death, and every death which you have caused to reach your goal?"
   Upon reading that not the slightest bit of fear lurked in his eyes,"I'm ready to face everyones death, including mine!", the swordsman called out. At that moment countless spirits of the town rushed at him all branding a weapon of some form,"so this is the final challenge to remove and kill every last one of them", drawing his sword, and weaving a spell, whom his mentor taught him. with each strict he made to a spirit, they were pulled into his sword. After a few hours of constantly swinging and dogging tiredness eased into him, a few attacks from his enemy's landed, pushing him further into an rage. shortly after only one remained the one that stood back, and watched as he weakened him self down.
      " must applaud you but here is were you will die.", the hollow sound from the spirit  floated over to him, "Irick, you have done well now u will have to face me." the two locked in batter as the night remained never changing, the spirit mirroring Irick's actions. Seeing what he must do to defeat the spirit whom was copping him, he plunged the his own sword into his heart kill the both of them off.
    "So now the sword of souls is once again returned with every last soul that has been forged by death's grip, only the true owner can live to see the next day, Iricks tiredness clouded his judgment and he feel to his own blade.", an mysterious voice from the fountain spoke out.


well that is the end of the prologue now hop everyone likes it thus far.
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well what to say other than never have a relationship, your heart will be broken every time.
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