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[ZeroGaiden]

Well anyways, my first Sprite Comic, and I might upload them every day. I don't have a plot yet, but I'm not going to rethink or try, I will just do it. Wish me luck doing this comic.

http://sgcomic.smackjeeves.com/

[Mike Caron]

Brutally honest opinion? It sucks.

The flow of the comics is disjointed, there's no humour (or drama, if that's what you were going for), and if I pretend that what you have is a plot, I feel like I want to gouge my brain out. Also, the "author as a character" trope is so far past its expiry date, the FDA is readying a task-force to oversee its removal.

The only bright side is that you're not using MS Paint.

I apologize if you're offended, but it had to be said.

[rabidzora]

Oh my.

Oh, my oh my oh my.

The typos and grammatical errors alone have knocked me "uncontionus."

And never EVER start a story if you truly don't have a plot idea yet.  Come up with something, don't start winging out sprites and having them fight each other for no reason.

[ZeroGaiden]

Oh my.

Oh, my oh my oh my.

The typos and grammatical errors alone have knocked me "uncontionus."

And never EVER start a story if you truly don't have a plot idea yet.  Come up with something, don't start winging out sprites and having them fight each other for no reason.

I just don't know any purpose and I have no other jobs, but I like doing Comics just for fun.

[Mike Caron]

No no, you don't have to have any purpose. However, your comic does.

[OnewingedDragon]

Check this out:
http://webcomicbeacon.com/2007/12/06/twcb-episode-1-so-you-want-to-make-a-webcomic/

[demon of razgriz]

there is only 1 webcomic ive ever seen that was sucessful without a plot (but it technically has one*doesn't belive in technicalitys*)

http://www.mspaintadventures.com/

try to aim like that if you want to start off without one

[rabidzora]

That doesn't really count, since the plot is written by the readers, y'know?  This didn't have that option.

And yeah, I love that comic.