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My first Comic
ZeroGaiden:
Well anyways, my first Sprite Comic, and I might upload them every day. I don't have a plot yet, but I'm not going to rethink or try, I will just do it. Wish me luck doing this comic.
http://sgcomic.smackjeeves.com/
Mike Caron:
Brutally honest opinion? It sucks.
The flow of the comics is disjointed, there's no humour (or drama, if that's what you were going for), and if I pretend that what you have is a plot, I feel like I want to gouge my brain out. Also, the "author as a character" trope is so far past its expiry date, the FDA is readying a task-force to oversee its removal.
The only bright side is that you're not using MS Paint.
I apologize if you're offended, but it had to be said.
rabidzora:
Oh my.
Oh, my oh my oh my.
The typos and grammatical errors alone have knocked me "uncontionus."
And never EVER start a story if you truly don't have a plot idea yet. Come up with something, don't start winging out sprites and having them fight each other for no reason.
ZeroGaiden:
Quote from: rabidzora on October 10, 2008, 04:51:29 PM>>>>Oh my.
Oh, my oh my oh my.
The typos and grammatical errors alone have knocked me "uncontionus."
And never EVER start a story if you truly don't have a plot idea yet. Come up with something, don't start winging out sprites and having them fight each other for no reason.
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I just don't know any purpose and I have no other jobs, but I like doing Comics just for fun.
Mike Caron:
No no, you don't have to have any purpose. However, your comic does.
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