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Useless
« on: April 13, 2009, 09:35:03 PM »
Something to pass time if you don't like it, screw you, I don't really care. I'm putting seriously like no effort into it. But if you do like it, I am going to continue writing it.

Prologue:

The run down house was a horrible sight to look at, Peter Corn, a government employee, couldn’t believe a child could live there. He sighed and took a step forward, a loud, fierce bark rang out. Peter stepped back as a huge dog lunged at him.
“Nemi! Down!” a gruff voice called from the front of the house. Peter stared, standing there was a man, but the man didn’t attract his attention it was the child he was holding by the hair. The child had fallen to their knees beside the man.
“What are you doing on my land?” the man growled, Nemi snarling at him.
“I’m here from the government, Mistreating and Abuse of Children is my department, and it’s also why I’m here,” Peter stated staring at the trembling child. The man looked down at the child, then back at Peter. He smiled, and lifted the child by his hair.
“Nemi, attack,” he snapped, lifting the child so that Nemi and Peter were in view. The huge dog snarled and lunged, Peter was paralyzed in fear, the dog was mere feet from him.
“NANI! PROTECT!” the child screamed, his voice snapped Peter out of his paralysis. A huge snake swooped down and wrapped around the dog, halting its lunge at Peter.
“You stupid child!” the man yelled hurling the child at the wall. The child gave a yelp as a sickening crack sounded as his back hit the wall. The child lay motionless on the ground. Peter wanted to run to the child’s aid but he couldn’t, not with the man there anyways. He stared at the man, then the snake, and lastly the dog. He wanted to run, every fiber of his being was commanding him to run, but he couldn’t. His job demanded that he removed a child in danger.
“Well, GET OFF MY LAND!” the man yelled at Peter, Peter stepped back, but did not run. His eyes were fixed on the child, who still hadn’t moved. The child was in severe danger, if he left for reinforcements the child could be killed, but he couldn’t take the man on alone. Peter turned in ran.



And there you have it my sucky story. I think it might turn out sorta good but no one knows until it's finished.
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Re: Useless
« Reply #1 on: April 16, 2009, 04:51:33 PM »
wow, that was super awesome!
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All this pain, all this hate, all that noise hurting my mind. I don't want to hear them, I want them to leave, I want to be left alone, with thoughts, not voices. They are mean, they are evil, they want me to do things that I just can't. I want them quiet, shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!! Leave me alone and let me think! Don't hurt me, stop taunting me, Stop making me cry and hurting myself! I just want to be FREE!!!!

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« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2009, 06:09:34 PM »
I would so totally update IF the next chapters didn't contain mature content...I would SO totally update but since Mike doesn't want any mature content on his PG13 site I won't update. *sigh* And no Rose, the story isn't going to you either!
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Re: Useless
« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2009, 06:16:58 PM »
mawwwww! :(
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All this pain, all this hate, all that noise hurting my mind. I don't want to hear them, I want them to leave, I want to be left alone, with thoughts, not voices. They are mean, they are evil, they want me to do things that I just can't. I want them quiet, shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!! Leave me alone and let me think! Don't hurt me, stop taunting me, Stop making me cry and hurting myself! I just want to be FREE!!!!

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Re: Useless
« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2009, 09:56:33 PM »
Well, maybe you post the 2nd chapter, and just give us a recap of sorts on the 1st.

BTW, that prologue was pretty good.
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Re: Useless
« Reply #5 on: July 29, 2010, 09:14:23 PM »
Unfortunately the story does not work without all its chapters and it was on my old laptop, which died. I do still have the story but its mature content prevents its posting. Guess you'll have to check if I ever post it on FF.
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