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A Perfect Match
« on: April 20, 2008, 12:31:35 PM »
Ok, so it may not be the sequel everyone wanted to read, but this is a new story. And I really like it, so read and respond.
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warning: blood, violence, tranquials, diolouge a plenty.

A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 1

   "It's down to you two."
   "Yes, it is."
   "So who wants to go first, Sam or Scott?"
   "I will."
   "Ok, Sam will go first."
   "Release the dog!"
   "Grrrr...rauuh!"
   "Once you past 7 minutes, we will pull the dog back."
   "Fine."
   The dog was released, and it attacked Sam hard. Sam doesn't even flinch as the dog slashed and bit him. After 7 minutes, they pulled the dog back.
   "You know what to do Scott."
   "I know."
   "Once you hit 7.30 minutes, we will pull back the dog."
   "Understood."
   "Release the dog."
   The dog slashed and bit Scott all over his body. After 5 minutes the dog bit Scott's right hand and hung on for a minute, then bit his left thigh.
   "Nggh..."
   "Are you ok?"
   "I'm fine, keep timing."
   At 7.30 minutes, they tried to pull the dog off, it held on tight, so it took them about 1-2 minutes just to get it off. They trainquelled the dog and hid it deep in the park.
   "As usually, Scott wins, he is stronger."
   "Now we leave."
   Everyone left, all but Scott. He walked over to a tree and sat down.
   "Come on Scott, the dog will get you if you don't move," Sam said, still bleeding from the test.
   "Go on without me ok. I'll be fine," Scott growled out.
   "Ok, but you should know, from these kind of things people go crazy for a while," Sam said, leaving.
   "Whatever," Scott mumbled. He sat for a while, then he started to hear things and he started to panic.
   "I got to get out," Scott mumbled, forcing himself up and wandered for help.
   'Who would be in the park this late at night?' Scott thought walking around, a little lost in the park.
   "Throw them up and let them shine, going out of my f#@%in' mind," a voice sang out quietly.
   "Hey, help me please!" Scott called rushing over to the person.
   "Huh?" the voice responded, pausing their music.
   "I need out," Scott replied, starting to lose consciousness.
   "Well if it isn't Scott Suigo," the voice smirked, putting Scott's arm around his shoulders.
   "Yes, who are..." Scott started, trying to stay conscious.
   "Ivan Shofé," Ivan replied, leading Scott out of the park.
   "Aww, man. You're a preppy," Scott whined, now trying to look at Ivan.
   "Do you want help or not?" Ivan scolded, upset that he's only known as a 'preppy'.
   "Fine." Scott answered, they were on the street.
   "Well, where's your house?" Ivan asked, holding Scott with a bit of difficulty.
   "Cross the street, turn right. Go down that street until you come to the second light, turn left, then go down until you reach Minsok Ave., turn on that street. Then look for #104," Scott said, going a bit heavier to Ivan.
   Ivan followed the given directions to Scott's house, and looked at it. It was a huge black house, dark red roof, deep purple lights, and the windows were tinted dark blue.
   "It looks like a goth house," Ivan stated, walking up the steps to the porch.
   "So? My family isn't goth, ok! I can take care of myself now," Scott insisted, struggling to the door.
   "Ok, but you still need help. You're bleeding so much," Ivan replied, trying to help Scott more than Scott wanted.
   "You're such a pain, go away," Scott said going to knock on the door, but almost fell.
   "No way, you're going to get hurt," Ivan chuckled, catching Scott. Ivan knocked on the door and a young girl with glittery blue hair answered the door.
   "Big Brother Scott!" the young girl called.
   "Hey Jewlia, wanna help me in?" Scott smiled.
   "Ok!" Jewlia answered taking Scott's hand and led him in. Scott took a few steps on his own until he passed out and hit the floor.
   "Oh noes! Big Brother Scott fell!" Jewlia cried rushing over to him.
   "Maybe I can help," Ivan said, walking in and shut the door.
   "How?" Jewlia asked, watching him.
   "I can help bandage him," Ivan suggested.
   "You bandage him, Jewlia doesn't want to see his man parts," Jewlia whined, getting up.
   "Well show me where the bathroom and bandages are," Ivan replied, chuckling. 'Hn, man parts'
   Jewlia showed Ivan where everything was, and she also asked him to use bright coloured bandages, to give Scott some 'colour'.
   Ivan first sat Scott down onto the toilet, after putting the seats down. He then removed the tattered and torn tops and coat.
   "Oh, my, lord," Ivan gasped, looking at all the cuts. He began to bandage Scott's back and chest, avoiding the rings on his nipples. Once he was done with that he went to the arms.
   After he finished them he went to remove Scott's boots and socks, the carefully took off the pants.
   "Is that..." Ivan started, noticing the bite mark on Scott's thigh. It was partly covered up by the boxers. Ivan moved the part of the boxers up too look at the bite mark," ...a bite mark? How did he...never mind."
   He bandaged the bite mark, and the rest of the legs. Once he was done, he noticed that there are cuts on the right hand.
   "Well, I did promise Jewlia I would use colour," Ivan said, getting the 'Hello Kitty' band aids. He put them on Scott's right hand.
   He then lifted Scott up and brought him out of the bathroom, then realized he doesn't know where Scott's room is.
   "Jewlia, I'll need assistance," Ivan called.
   "Jewlia is here to help. What does new guy need?" Jewlia asked, now at his side.
   "Ok, I need you to tell me where his room is, then go find me some black thread and a sewing needle," Ivan replied, struggling with Scott.
   "Big Brother Scott's room is the door with the many signs. Jewlia has her mission!" Jewlia cheered, rushing off to find the things for Ivan.
   "Of course it is," Ivan muttered, walking to Scott's room.
   Once he got to Scott's room, he opened the door with a bit of struggle. Then he walked over to the bed and placed Scott onto it. Ivan then pulled the blanket up over him to his neck. Then he left the room and went to the washroom to gather up Scott's torn clothing.
   "Jewlia has found the items!" Jewlia called, rushing into the washroom.
   "Thank you Jewlia," Ivan smiled, getting ready to sew the clothing.
   "You can sew?" Jewlia asked, amazed that he could sew.
   "Yes I can," Ivan replied, sewing up the T-shirt.
   Jewlia watched Ivan sew up all the torn clothing that Scott wore. Once he was done, the clothing looked good as new. Ivan picked up the clothing and went to Scott's room, then placed the clothing down on a chair and left Scott's room closing the door behind him. He went to the front door and got his shoes on.
   "Are you Jewlia's friend?" Jewlia asked as Ivan got his coat on.
   "Sure we are," Ivan replied.
   "Wait here!" Jewlia cheered and rushed off to the washroom, then rushed back with 2 band aids.
   "Thank you?" Ivan responded when Jewlia gave him one.
   "Put it on," Jewlia said, putting her's on.
   "Ok, ok, it's on," Ivan replied showing her his right index finger. The one with the new applied 'Hello Kitty' band aid on it.
   "Yeays! You and Jewlia are band aid buddies!" Jewlia cheered, putting her finger by his.
   "We are now," Ivan chuckled. He went to leave, opening the front door, then turned to her, "Don't tell your brother what I did, ok?"
   "Ok, Big Brother Scott will never know," Jewlia said, putting her finger to her lips.
   "Ok, thank you. Bye," Ivan said, leaving.

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And there it is, my new story. I will post when I can, as often as I can. Thank you for reading.
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All this pain, all this hate, all that noise hurting my mind. I don't want to hear them, I want them to leave, I want to be left alone, with thoughts, not voices. They are mean, they are evil, they want me to do things that I just can't. I want them quiet, shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!! Leave me alone and let me think! Don't hurt me, stop taunting me, Stop making me cry and hurting myself! I just want to be FREE!!!!

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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #1 on: April 20, 2008, 12:43:10 PM »

It's a good read, and quite interesting so far actually. My only qualm...purple is extremely hard to read, and very hard on the eyes I am afraid to say. Perhaps a different colour would be much better  :)
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #2 on: April 21, 2008, 04:11:27 PM »
I'm sorry for the colour, but I was going for a dark colour for a dark story. But I guess I should change it so people can read it. It is now in maroon, so I hope that works better than purple.
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2008, 02:52:10 PM »
Here's the second chapter, faster than I thought it would be out, but here we go!
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warning: slight violance, yelling, planning, and dilouge a plenty!

A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 2

   "Nnggh, errm...I'm...in bed?" Scott mumbled looking around. Then glad that it was the beginning of summer.
   Scott got up, with some trouble, and went to his mirror, "I'm all bandaged up, and in just my boxers I see," he mumbled trying to remember what happened the night before.
   'I remember getting home, with Ivan, then walking in...then...err! What was after that!' Scott thought as he went to put his clothes on, then noticed the ones on the chair.
   "What the...who...?" Scott mumbled, lifting up the sewn clothing.
   "Good morning Big Brother Scott!" Jewlia called from the hall.
   "Morning Jewel," Scott called back, getting dressed.
   After he was dressed, black make-up applied, black nail polish on and piercings in, he left his room to go get some breakfast.
   "Good morning son," his mom said, making French toast.
   "Mornin'," Scott answered, sitting at the table.
   "Mommy Raymel, looky looky! Isn't it pretty and such!?" Jewlia called bouncing into the kitchen with a picture in her hands. As Scott knew that he was good at drawing in general, he makes everything look realistic. He knew Jewlia's talents rest in outdoor scenery.
   "That's beautiful, let's hang it on the fridge," Raymel said, Jewlia rushed over to the fridge to put it up.
   "That's really good Jewel, you'd be a perfect outdoor painter," Scott replied after taking a look at her picture on the fridge.
   "Thank you Big Brother Scott. Jewlia is really happy," Jewlia cheered as she sat down.
   "And why are you so happy today, Jewel?" Scott asked, knowing there was more then one reason.
   "Because of the picture, and that you're all better and such!" Jewlia said, knowing that Scott knew the last reason.
   "Why are you wearing a band aid, are you hurt, Jewel?" Scott asked, looking at her index finger on her right hand.
   "Oh, this. No, Jewlia is fine. I just wanted a band aid," Jewlia responded smiling.
   "Are you sure?" Scott asked, his blue eyes glowing.
   "Jewlia is sure," Jewlia responded. She noticed his eyes glowing and shock a little bit.
   "Breakfast is ready," Raymel said, placing the plates of food down in front of them.
   "Thanks mom," Scott said, now knowing the truth.
   After they ate breakfast, Scott got up and left the house.
   "He knows what happened last night doesn't he?" Raymel asked, seeing Jewlia shake.
   "Yes, Jewlia is sure Big Brother Scott knows. Poor Ivan, what is going to happen to him Mommy Raymel?" Jewlia asked, scared for Ivan.
   "I don't know," Raymel replied. Jewlia walked over and hugged her mom.
   'Where does he live?' Scott thought as he walked down the street with his long black coat flailing out behind him as he walked. People got out of his way when they saw him walking briskly down the street. They knew what he was, and that they couldn't do anything about it. Everyone knew that Goth's, and only Goth's, had magic powers that no one else could ever have.
   Scott walked on for a while more until he heard, from two streets away, that familiar voice.
   "And he asked me for help, isn't that just odd," Ivan said, others giggled.
   'That way,' Scott thought as he walked right to the sound of Ivan's voice.
   "Did you bring him home?" a voice asked.
   "Yeah, he could barely walk and..." Ivan continued until a hand, covered in 'Hello Kitty' band aids, grabbed him by the throat and slammed him into a wall.
   "Is this him?" a voice asked, shakily.
   "Yes." Ivan said, trying to breathe.
   "You have no right to tell everyone about that!" Scott growled out, squeezing tighter.
   "Bye Ivan," the other voices said, and they all rushed off.
   "Let me go..." Ivan gasped.
   "Fine, we need to talk anyway," Scott agreed, still mad, he let Ivan go.
   "You..talk.. I gather...air," Ivan gasped, breathing heavily.
   "Fine, I'll start with this morning. I woke up in bed, not the floor, and I was in just my boxers, instead of all my clothes, and I was all bandaged. Care to enlighten me why?" Scott said, glaring down at Ivan.
   "You...asked for...my help...so I...provided..." Ivan gasped, breathing a bit better.
   "I remember telling you to piss off when I got to the door," Scott growled, glaring down at him.
   "Your sister...asked me to...bandage you...she didn't want...to see your...hn...man parts," Ivan explained as he got up, still breathing heavily.
   "More like you suggested to her your unwanted help!" Scott yelled.
   "Why are you mad? You're bandaged and fine, but you shouldn't be walking, or outside for that matter," Ivan said, upset that Scott was freaking out about this, and that he managed to get out of the house and not fall.
   "You can't tell me what to do! No one can! And I'm mad because you had no right to even walk into my house!" Scott yelled, growling at Ivan with anger.
   "Well sorry for walking into your house and helping you. You happy now?" Ivan said, getting ready to leave.
   "No," Scott said, then he punched Ivan in the face so hard that Ivan's left eye went purple in seconds, "Now I am." With that Scott left.
   "AAAhhhhhh! That pompous little....err," Ivan scowled as he trudged home.
   'He invaded my privacy by walking into my house, then into my room, and talked to my little sis. He won't live for long!' Scott thought as he walked back home.
   "Hey, you're up and moving. You sure you're supposed to be?" Sam called, as he and a group of 4 others followed.
   "I'll be fine," Scott responded.
   "Think you're up for some fun later tonight?" one of the others asked.
   "Sure thing Brad. I'll meet you all in the park at midnight, okay?" Scott said, now tired.
   "We'll be waiting," Brad replied, walking off with the others.
   "I need to sleep," Scott mumbled, a few houses away from his home.

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There it is, a bit more of ScottxIvan, but not in the nice way or the pervy way. So yeah, at the moment Scott is really mad at Ivan, so you now have to wait until the third chapter to see what happens next! Like always, read and respond.
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #4 on: May 14, 2008, 04:26:12 PM »
Ok, so here it is, the third chapter!
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warning: violence, name calling, hateful thoughts, new characters, a new side of Scott, a deal, unknown feelings come back, and diolouge a plenty.

A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 3

   Once he got back home, he went right to his room. Scott then proceed to remove his coat, his shirts, and his boots. Then he laid on his bed and just looked up at his ceiling.
   'I hate Ivan so much. He's a preppy jerk, he thinks he knows all. He thinks he has the right to tell every one of his preppy little friends what happened. He doesn't have that right! I should've killed him. Then why didn't I?' Scott thought as he slowly drifted off to sleep.

Meanwhile, out with Ivan...

   "That jerk! Ahh. He punched my in the eye, the EYE! The hell does he think he's doing! He had no right to punch me," Ivan muttered as he walked into his house.
   "Hey little bro, what the hell happened to you?" Ivan's sister asked once she saw him.
   "Got in a fight," Ivan replied as he headed to his room.
   "Who did it!? I'll make them pay for what they did," she said.
   "Marlené, don't worry about it. I'll be fine," Ivan said going to his room.
   "But I always worry for you. Was it that little ungrateful jerk that you helped home last night?" Marlené asked, as Ivan was shutting his door.
   "If I said no, would you leave me alone and drop it?" Ivan asked through his door.
   "No, because then I would know that you were lying to me," Marlené responded, now knowing that it was.
   "Well, then just drop it," Ivan scolded as he lay on his bed.
   "What was his name, I'll pound some sense into this fellow," Marlené said, she just wanted to look out for her younger brother.
   "I'll deal with it later today, I know a bit of his daily routine," Ivan called back.
   "Ok, you better. Or I'll do it later," Marlené replied and then walked off to her own room.
   "I hate that Goth know it all! He's such an ungrateful ignorant git! I should have just let him bleed his guts out that night, I shouldn't've even brought him home! But then, why did I? And what is it that I'm feeling that compelled me to do it? Ah, forget about Ivan, it's probably nothing," Ivan muttered as he drifted to sleep.

At around 11:30pm...

   "I'll go see him now. It's not like he would leave or something," Ivan mumbled as he left his house quietly and went to go see Scott.
   "I guess I could go to the park early, it's not like anyone would come to see me of all people anyway," Scott mumbled as he left his house and headed to the park.
   On the way to the park Scott heard footsteps coming towards him.
   "Well, let's see who it is," Scott whispered and hid in the shadows.
   Ivan walked right by him, stopped and looked around, then continued walking towards Scott's house.
   "Hn, like he'll find me there, no way, I'll be at the park," Scott said as he walked off to the park.
   Once at the park, Scott waited for his friends and sat by a tree. When he heard the slightest bit of movement he got up and stared right at Sam.
   "Your senses are even stronger than Brad's, that's amazing," Sam said as he walked over to Scott.
   "So what do we plan to do tonight, did Brad tell you?" Scott muttered as he looked up at Sam.
   "Nope, but he's here now, so we'll soon know," Sam replied as Brad walked over to them.
   "I planned us to go around town and 'play' with the town's people, you in?" Brad mumbled out as everyone nodded.
   "Good, let's go," Terance said and they all left the park.
   The group walked around the town, using their magic and terrorized people for their own amusement. Then all of a sudden Scott noticed a certain red-headed male walking down the street. Scott only caught the tail end of the guy's sentence.
   "...that jerk."
   "Look, it's someone we haven't picked on yet," Terance said, some what happy.
   "You guy's know what, I'll take care of him. After this I'll call it a night, but for you guy's, I'm callin' it a night," Scott muttered, the others got the hint and left, pleased at what they did that night.
   "Well well, if it isn't Ivan. This is going to be fun," Scott whispered into Ivan's ear. Ivan, not knowing the intentions, blushed only for a second before he felt a fist collide with his jaw.
   "The hell was that for!" Ivan yelled, pissed that he just got punched for no good reason.
   "I feel like toying with you as my last victim," Scott replied, kicking Ivan in the shins.
   "You stupid son of a..."
   "I'm really only doing this for my group, since they all haven't left yet, so play along. I promise you get to get whatever you want from me later if you do this for me," Scott whispered into Ivan's ear. Scott had him by the collar of his shirt.
   "Anything?" Ivan whispered back, the thoughts running in his mind were endless.
   "Anything," Scott whispered back, then threw Ivan into the alley.
   "Good, he seems happier then he was this morning," Brad whispered as he, Sam, and Josh left.
   "Well, with what you said to me was totally not you, but I'll accept the words and hold you to them," Ivan said as Scott was in front of him.
   "I know that, but I didn't want you to make a scene in front of the guys," Scott said, now crouched down in front of Ivan. 'I still don't know what this feeling is inside me, but it only happens when I'm near Ivan. What is this that I feel?'
   "Ok, I think I get it. You do realize that you don't have to show off all the time just for them," Ivan said, sitting up, since he was laying on the ground. 'I feel this flutter in my stomach, and I think I'm finally understanding why. I think I'm in love with the one person that I can never have.'
   "You of all people should know that I have to. Well, sorry for all the bruises I know I gave you. Now go home and rest, I don't want to have to kill you the next time I see you," Scott whispered in Ivan's ear once again. After that Scott was gone, Ivan just sat there blushing and breathing heavy.
   "Whatever," Ivan muttered as he went home, he was still blushing by the time he got to his porch.
   "Hey there little bro...are you blushing?" Marlené said as Ivan walked into the house and walked right passed her.
   "Drop it ok. It's none of your business, and just because I may or may not be blushing doesn't mean that you have to be the first one to know. So just leave me alone for the rest of tonight, and just to tell you, I did deal with the problem. So you don't have to," Ivan growled out, he then went to his room and slammed his door shut.
   "He's never talked to me this way before. What is happening to you little bro, why won't you let me know?" Marlené whispered, going to her room.
   'I'm definitely in love with you Scott Suigo, but do you love me back? Do you feel the same way I do? What am I thinking, he wouldn't love me, I'm a preppy after all,' Ivan thought as he changed and fell onto his bed.

Meanwhile, back at Scott's house...

   'I don't know what I feel about you Ivan. I've never felt this way before, I've never had a girlfriend or a boyfriend for that matter. You have to help me with my feelings, get me to learn what I feel, and tell me what I want to hear. If I go on this way, I may never see you again, and it's all because of my stupid jerk friends. I need to talk to you, alone at night, that way we are out of sight. Wow, I never thought I could think in a rhyme, cool.' Scott thought as he changed and fell onto his bed, but he just stared at the ceiling.

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There you have it. Now Ivan knows what he feels is true, but will Scott ever accept these new feelings? Only I know, and when I post, you will too! But now you have to wait until the fourth chapter! Read and respond.
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #5 on: May 22, 2008, 03:34:05 PM »
Whoo! It's about time I post the fourth chapter! So here it is!
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warning: a little bit of pain, some yelling, iterigations, confessions a plenty, thoughts, realizations, Lucky Charms, planning, and diolouge a plentyful!

A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 4

   "Big Brother Scott! You have a visitor!" Jewlia called to him the next morning.
   "Who would want to see me, other then the guys?" Scott mumbled as he got out of bed, and winced in pain. His cuts were a reminder that he was limited in his movements.
   "Knock knock," Ivan said as he stood at the door frame.
   "Why did you come here? If you wanted to see my sister..."
   "I heard her yell you have a visitor. I'm not here to see your sister, I'm here to visit you," Ivan said as he walked towards Scott.
   "Why?" Scott asked, his left eyebrow raised in question.
   "Because...there is something I feel I have to tell you. Although I know you might punch me in the eye again for saying it, but I'll risk it," Ivan said, closing Scott's door.
   "Well...come out with it," Scott replied, standing in front of Ivan.
   "Scott, I know I'm...in...love with you. I knew I was for a long while but never accepted the fact, now I know it and accept it. And now you probably want to punch me in the face," Ivan explained, bracing himself for the punch.
   "I'm not going to punch you," Scott muttered, realizing what had just happened.
   "You...what?" Ivan asked, not letting his guard down but he wasn't bracing for a punch.
   "Ok, so I think my sister got to me, but I won't punch you. I...am not sure...completely how I feel about you. All I know is that it isn't hate," Scott explained, knowing how stupid he must have sounded.
   "Really? Well, I guess I could help you with that," Ivan replied, beaming.
   "I hoped you would. I didn't think anyone else was good enough for this challenge."
   "Awesome! Want me to start helping you out now?" Ivan asked, eager to know what Scott had to say.
   "Can I get dressed first?" Scott asked, noticing Ivan blush a little.
   "Right, ok, but be quick," Ivan replied, leaving the room.
   "Ok," Scott whispered, as he walked over to his closet to get his clothes.
   Once Scott was done getting dressed he left his room and walked into the kitchen to grab a bite to eat.
   "So how can I help you, exactly?" Ivan asked as he followed Scott into the kitchen.
   "I don't know. I guess we could start with the feeling I feel, then move from there. Geez, I thought you would know what to do," Scott explained, eating a bowl of cereal.
   "Well, I've never had to help someone with their feelings, so sorry I don't know what to do," Ivan replied, sitting down at the table.
   "Ok, well...I guess I feel, well it feels like a million butterflies in my stomach fluttering all at once trying to get out. It kinda hurts, but it also feels nice at the same time," Scott explained around a mouthful of Lucky Charms.
   "Ok, when does this feeling occur the most?" Ivan asked, knowing what the feeling was. 'That feeling happens to me when I'm near you Scott. That is love, and you will know who you love when you tell me when this feeling happens.'
   "Well...when I'm near...you..." Scott confessed quietly after he swallowed his mouthful of Lucky Charms.
   "ME!?!?" Ivan shouted, extremely surprised. He never knew that the strongest and most vicious Goth had it in for him.
   "Yes, please keep it down, I have a reputation to keep," Scott hissed, not really knowing that this was the reaction that would happen.
   "Sorry, but I never knew that you felt that way for me," Ivan whispered,, controlling himself.
   "I didn't know either until I thought it over last night. Haven't you wondered why I never tried to kill you? Why the most damage I did to you was a punch or a kick? The others that crossed my path and pissed me off no longer exist, and yet you're the only one that has," Scott explained, and Ivan nodded realizing the same thing.
   "I was wondering that, now I know I guess," Ivan said smiling.
   "Cool, sooo now what?" Scott asked, never really having had a relationship before, he didn't know what happened now.
   "Well, usually people like us would hook up, but I don't see that in the near future," Ivan explained, looking towards the fridge.
   "Why not? We love each other, so why not go out?" Scott asked, not realizing what he said until after he said it.
   "Your reputation. Although...there is a way," Ivan smirked after he thought of the greatest plan ever.
   "What? Tell me," Scott whispered, liking the slightly evil smirk on Ivan.
   "Ok, here's the plan..."

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Ok, so if you couldn't already tell it is a bit of a yaoi story. But there are no graphic scenes of any sort. And yes I left you hanging. Whoo! You need to wait for the next chapter, and that may be awhile for exams are closing in on me and the homework is rushing up more than before. But I hope you all still enjoy it, read and respond like always.
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #6 on: May 22, 2008, 04:26:18 PM »
It's pretty good so far. But be careful, too graphic, and freedom of speech or not, this is an all ages site and it will be removed immediately.
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« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2008, 08:10:29 PM »
Ok, whew has it really been a month? Well here is what I've got, the fifth chapter! I hope you all like it, and no grapic scenes. It may be a short chapter, to me anyway, but it is still good. so enjoy!
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warning: thinking out loud, violence, yelling, questions, hint at gender interest, plan in action, jealousy, KISSING SCENE (not graphic, but still there), lies, suggestion, and diolouge a plentyfulls!

A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 5

   Later that day, after Ivan left, Scott walked off feeling like he needed some fresh air. As he walked around he saw how other people acted around him and how couples acted normally in public. Scott has never seen these things before, really because he never really looked for them before.
   "I never thought about dating before, really because I never thought I would," Scott muttered as he continued his walk.
   "Do you plan to?"
   "And if I do Josh?" Scott said, knowing the person who asked.
   "Then I get to tell the others, I just need a name," Josh whispered evilly.
   "Oh that, well their name is..." Scott slashed Josh in half then stabbed him in the heart, "You don't need to know."
   After burning the dead body Scott left the park, 'So this is why I should never talk to myself, others can hear me,' Scott thought. Without noticing it Scott ran into a red headed girl.
   "The hell was that for!?" she yelled.
   "Hm? Oh, sorry, I was lost in thought. You remind me of someone," Scott apologized.
   "Yeah, I should, my name is Marlené Shofé, I'm Ivan's older sister," Marlené replied as she glared at Scott.
   "Oh, I thought so. Sorry for runnin' into you," Scott responded and started to walk off.
   "So that's all you have to say to me? No smart ass remark? No hit on? No lame pick up line?" Marlené yelled at Scott's back.
   "I'm sorry, but you don't have the lumps and bumps in the right spots," Scott muttered, leaving Marlené in awe.
   Scott went off to his favorite building roof and sat there until 10pm, which was about the time he jumped off and headed to the alley way where he threw Ivan the night before.
   "Hey, 'bout time you showed up," Ivan said as he walked closer to Scott.
   "Sorry, was just thinking of the conversation that I had with someone in the park earlier today," Scott admitted, putting his arms around Ivan.
   "Who did you run into at the park earlier?" Ivan asked, not knowing what he was getting into.
   "Oh, just a red-headed girl who was pissed at me for something about her younger brother," Scott explained and Ivan's mouth hung open just a little.
   "You, you talked to my sister!? What did she want?" Ivan asked, now a bit mad at his sister.
   "Well I kinda ran into her, she was expecting me to make a smartass remark or a lame pick up line or even hit on her," Scott responded, he brought himself a bit closer to Ivan.
   "Did you?" Ivan asked, looking Scott in the eyes.
   "Nope, I just apologised for running into her," Scott smirked, slightly liking the jealous Ivan.
   "What else did you tell her? You didn't tell her about us did you, because that would ruin our plan you know," Ivan responded, noticing Scott's smirk.
   "Oh, well I just told her, she didn't have her lumps and bumps in the right places, is all," Scott replied, almost laughing when he saw the reaction on Ivan's features.
   "Well, then you do love me," Ivan whispered. His lips touched Scott's and Scott's tongue slipped into Ivan's mouth. They kissed liked that for awhile until Scott picked up a presence of someone coming closer.
   "Someone's coming," Scott whispered as he pulled away from Ivan and went to see who was coming.
   "Ok," Ivan muttered, watching his love go to the end of the alley way.
   Scott looked around, and saw that red hair coming down the street, "Shit," Scott muttered, walking back to Ivan.
   "Who is it?" Ivan asked, in a whisper, but found out when he saw the apologetic look from Scott and felt the punch. He rubbed the bruise as he watched Scott jump onto the roof of the building to the right.
   "Brother, there you are! Why are you still out!?" Marlené called as she walked down the alley way towards him.
   "Figures," Ivan muttered, looking up to the right slightly and noticed that Scott was watching him.
   "Come on, let's go home," Marlené said holding out her hand to help him up.
   "I'm....waiting for someone here," Ivan replied, not taking her offered hand.
   "Who? And why are you rubbing your arm? Did you get hurt?" Marlené asked, looking at his arm.
   "I'm waiting for a friend, and I got a bruise. I didn't notice it was there until now, I think I got it the other day when I got into that one fight," Ivan lied, his sister bought it.
   "Oh, ok. Well...don't be out too late, and look out for that one Goth ok. Don't speak to him, he might get the wrong idea," Marlené said as she walked away.
   "Ivan looked up to the right and noticed no one there, "Did he..."
   "Geez, now I know why never to talk to your sister. Man, what is her issue?" Scott asked, as he was croutched right behind Ivan.
   "Don't sneak up on me like that," Ivan replied in a whisper, blushing at how close Scott was.
   "But I couldn't help it, you're too cute to leave alone," Scott whispered in Ivan's ear, Scott's hand on Ivan's chest.
   "Understandable, but just don't do that to me often ok?" Ivan requested.
   "Fine, I'll try not to. Maybe I can bring you to my house one day so we can do this, if you like," Scott whispered, smirking.
   "That would be too soon right now, we may need to sneak about awhile longer until we both feel ready about telling our families," Ivan replied, panting lightly.
   "Ok," Scott whispered. He gave Ivan a kiss on the cheek, told him good night, and left the alley way to go home to bed.
   "Night," Ivan whispered back, then rushed home.

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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #8 on: July 19, 2008, 09:28:00 PM »
Ok, so I'll explain here to. I won't be on for awhile because our little kitten died eariler today. I've been crying all day now so I'm sorry.
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2008, 09:53:24 PM »
I'm back, and with chapter six in hand! Whoo! Enjoy!
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A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 6

   Ivan walked into his house really late that night, but he was damn good at sneaking in and out. He snuck back to his room and changed. He then laid down on his bed and looked up at the ceiling, thinking about the offer Scott gave him eariler and then the words he promised the other day.
   "I want to do this more often, but at your place Scott, I'm holding you to your words," Ivan whispered, drifting off to sleep.

The next morning....

   "Hey, has anyone seen Josh? It's like...like he just vanished into thin air," Terance asked as the group walked around the park.
   "Haven't seen him since yesturday, where did he go?" Sam wondered.
   "He won't be joining us anymore," Scott whispered, just joining the group.
   "Why?" Brad asked, knowing there had to be a really good reason for Scott to kill one of them.
   "He was going to betray me, so I couldn't let that happen. I had no other choice," Scott explained, no  regrets at all.
   "So we need one more member, now that Josh departed,"Jeff muttered, everyone else nodded.
   "I know a few people who would qualify, I'll get them and test them to narrow it down," Scott said, looking away from them and went to leave.
   "Who the hell made you the leader?" Terance yelled, outraged that Scott could do whatever he wants but he had to ask first.
   "Vote, who wants me to be the leader?" Scott asked, back still facing the others. 3 hands went up.
   "Majority rules, sorry Terance," Brad muttered, knowing Scott was very suited for the job.
   "Thank you, now if you don't mind," Scott said nonchalantly. He left them and went to find his options.
   The rest of the group went to the permanently dark area of the park to wait for those that qualified to join them.

In town...

   "I have 4 options that I could get, but I have to find a way to narrow it down to at least 2. Alright, let's see where they all are," Scott whispered on the roof of his favorite building. He looked around the city from his view point. He found all of them and went off to gather them up. He went to get Ivan first.
   "Hey beautiful," Scott whispered so only Ivan could hear him. Ivan, knowing who it was blushed.
   "Excuse me," Ivan told his friends. Ivan walked off with Scott out of ear shot of his friends, "What are you doing! I thought we promised to meet each other at night." Ivan hissed.
   "You're option one, I thought I could teach you to be..." Scott started to whispered.
   "What are you talking about!?" Ivan whispered back, a little confused.
   "Since us Goth's are missing one of us, I get to choose those who I think qualify. I can teach you to win the rest of them over. I would like you to be one of us," Scott explained, with a small pouty look when he finished.
   "Really!? I get to have powers like you?" Ivan asked, intrigued at the thought.
   "Only if you can win the guys over. And I can teach you how," Scott smirked, loving Ivan even more with his 'please-teach-me' look.
   "Ok, stay here," Ivan whispered, he walked over to his friends, "Sorry guys, I have something important to do right now, catch you guys later."
   "Isn't that guy a Goth?" a guy asked.
   "No questions, go," Ivan scolded, they all left.
   Once they all left Scott went about to teaching Ivan how to get the others to like him enough to join.

3 hours and a couple dozen tests later...

   "Ok, these are the two options that best qualify," Scott explained once he got to the permanently dark area of the park and to the guys.
   "Who are they?" Brad muttered the question.
   "Option one and three, Ivan Shofé and Matt Tesukiu," Scott introdued, waving his hand at said teens.
   "Hey," Matt mumbled, waving his hand slightly.
   "Hmmm..." the guys muttered slightly disappointed.
   Ivan just nodded to them to show that he acknowledged that they were there.
   "Hmmm..." the guys muttered slightly interested in Ivan.
   "You guys get to test these two for the qualities you want in our next one," Scott said, passing the judging to the guys.
   "You get final word," Brad said, not as a question, but as a fact.
   "Damn straight I do," Scott mumbled, the guys were looking over the two options they had.
   Ivan had his hands in his pockets and was slouched a bit as he stood and watched the guys look him over. Matt was a bit on edge, his hands in his pockets but was sweating a bit. Once the guys were done looking at them they stood in a small circle and muttered some things.
   "Do you both really want this?" Brad mumbled.
   "Meh," Ivan muttered, not looking at them, but at the forever dark sky above him.
   "Whatever," Matt whispered, staring at Scott.
   "Oh, I almost forgot, whoever doesn't join us must never come here again and will be tortured by us twice as much," Scott said, trying for reactions. True the person who doesn't join them can never go to the dark end of the park, but they won't be tortured.
   "Ennnh..." Matt whispered.
   Ivan just shrugged off the news. Matt saw this and just snapped.
   "How can you shurg that off! That information is very scary to anyone in our position and you just shurg it off!" Matt screamed, waving his hands frantically.
   "We have made a decision," Jeff mumbled, really quietly.
   "We chose Ivan, he is more fit to be one of us than Matt," Terance explained.
   "Matt, you worry too much," Sam said nonchalantly.
   "Matt, you haven't been chosen, you must never come to this end of the park again," Brad muttered.
   "Matt, what I said was a test. You failed it," Scott told him, his hand on Matt's shoulder.
   "You mean...I won't be..." Matt stumbled.
   "Tortured, no you won't be," Scott said, leading Matt out of the dark end.
   "Congrates Ivan, you are now one of us. Unfortantely, only Scott can distribute the powers to new comers. So when he feels like it, he will give them to you," Jeff said to Ivan.
   "Mmhm," Ivan nodded.
   "He's good. Can you speak words Ivan?" Sam asked, looking at Ivan with a raised eyebrow.
   "Yea, I can," Ivan whispered, leaning on a tree.
   "Good, I knew you looked familiar. Scott must really like you to choose you as an option," Brad muttered.
   "What do you mean?" Ivan asked quietly.
   "You were that one prep that Scott like to 'play' with. He must have changed his mind on you though, for you to be chosen," Brad explained.
   "And if he did?" Ivan mummbled.
   "No problem. I wouldn't even care if you two dated. I'm dating Jeff," Brad whispered. Jeff just nodded at the mention of his relationship.
   "Good, 'cause Ivan's mine. No one else's," Scott growled.
   "Ok," everyone else muttered.
   "I have some things to change, since I'm leader, as well," Scott started, Ivan smirked.

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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2008, 10:09:00 PM »
 
I don't see anything wrong with the content, so you're good ^^

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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #11 on: August 26, 2008, 01:46:41 PM »
You might want to be aware of what color the background will be for your post... Red on reddish brown or whatever the color is kind of makes reading difficult.
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 08:33:54 PM »
Duely noted. I think it may just be me but I can read the maroon on the reddish brown just fine and dandy. I'm sorry for the colour, but if I change it now I will have to change it throughout the whole story. I like to be consistent. But don't worry, my next story will be a nice easy to read colour. I'm almost done chapter one on that story too, so yeays!

Since I'm busy with job hunting, babysitting, stories, drawings and poems my next chapter may take a long while before it get's up. But to make it up to you all, it will be a longer chapter.
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« Reply #13 on: March 10, 2009, 06:36:01 PM »
Ok, so I know it has been much longer than expected for the update, but I have one. I did edit it just for you guys, but let's just say the copy I have on my computer is much longer. And sorry for it not being as long as I had hoped for, but its still going up.
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A Perfect Match
By: Dark Dragon
Chapter 7

   “That was a great meeting you had with the guys,” Ivan whispered to Scott. Scott's arms were wrapped around Ivan as they lay on Scott's bed.
   “I know, can't believe that they all were cool with the things I suggested to be changed,” Scott muttered, stroking Ivan's hair.
   “Suggested? You demanded them to like it or you'll kill them,” Ivan chuckled.
   “It still worked. That's all that matters,” Scott smiled. He started to gently kiss Ivan's neck.
   “Ennah,” Ivan moaned quietly, his arms tightened a bit and his hands clung to Scott's shirt. Scott liked the sound, and kissed up to Ivan's ear and nipped at the lobe. Ivan's moan was a bit louder now and his hands clung harder. Scott, still enjoying the sound of his lover’s moans, continued to kiss Ivan’s neck, then trailed to Ivan’s lips. Ivan’s hands grasped Scott’s shirt tightly as he responded to the kiss. Scott sat up a bit, bringing Ivan with him, he slide his hand under Ivan’s shirt and gently felt Ivan’s chest. Ivan just moan, Scott felt the moan in the kiss.
   Scott then broke the kiss and started to remove Ivan’s shirt, Ivan was at first a little reluctant, but gave in. Once the shirt was off, Scott kissed up Ivan’s beautiful creamy white skin.
   “Ennah…uuuhn…god….Scott…” Ivan panted as Scott just smirked and continued. Ivan was enjoying the feel of Scott’s lips trailing upward that he had a whole lot of trouble being quiet.
   Scott loved the way Ivan moaned, the way he moved, and the way he looked when he kissed his skin. Scott couldn’t help but go one step farther, when he felt a hand on his. Scott knew it was Ivan’s, it was so soft and warm and a luscious creamy white.
   “Ivan?” Scott asked, seeing Ivan’s look he thought that Ivan was going to ask him to stop.
   “You…need to be…careful…” Ivan panted, then let go of Scott’s hand. Scott thought about that for a  whole minute, then got up, shut his door, and climbed on top of Ivan. His lips resumed their trail on his chest.
            When he felt that warm soft hand once more. But it wasn’t on his hand this time, it was on his shirt. Scott looked up at Ivan and saw the pouty look, then he took of his own shirt. Ivan smiled, then wide eyed when he saw the perfectly sculpted chest of Scott. Ivan knew he saw the chest before, but not like this, not so up close and not at a time where he could admire it. Ivan loved it.
   Scott smiled at the look on Ivan’s features, then his hand trailed up Ivan’s chest releasing magic as it went. The magic went and soaked into Ivan’s skin. Ivan, seeing the slight glow, smiled as he felt the magic travel around in him.
             
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              Ivan’s hand that was on Scott’s back grabbed the skin, leaving pink marks.
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              Ivan was so close to doing just that when something went wrong.
             “Hey Scott, I was wooooondeeeerrriiing……….” Sam started then trailed off when he saw the sight before him.
   “Err…..hey Sammy, umm….I can totally explain this,” Scott tried to explain, of course it would be useless since all the guys already knew about the two of them.
   “No need, I was……interrupting anyway, I should just…” Sam started, but was cut off.
   “You were going to ask Scott something, so you should really do so now before he starts to think of ways to kill you,” Ivan stated, his arms around Scott in a possessive way.
   “I was just wondering if he wanted to go to the warehouse party tonight, but I suppose it would be a no, since he’s with you and all,” Sam rushed this all out. He didn’t want to have to avoid Scott or Ivan because of this.
   “There’s a warehouse party tonight!? Where? Which one? What time?” Scott asked, all excited.
   “You……plan to still go?” Sam asked, slightly scared at the bombardon of questions.
   “Yeah, I want to show Ivan what they’re like,” Scott exclaimed.
   “Wait…what?” both Sam and Ivan asked together.
   “You…don’t want to go?” Scott asked Ivan, sounding really hurt.
   “No, no, its not that…its just…” Ivan tried to explain.
   “Well, it’s on Pensulia Rd. that really big dark blue one, at around 8 pm,” Sam said, Scott memorizing all this.
   “Thanks Sammy,” Scott bemused, as Sam left with a slightly horrified face shutting the door.
   “Scott……” Ivan decided that he would just out right tell Scott that he didn’t want to go.
   “Ivan,” Scott answered, still feeling bad that Ivan had refused him. For the first time in his left, Scott was refused, by his boyfriend. What a way to be.
   “I’m sorry, but……I don’t really want to……”
   “I understand. Going somewhere with the same gender as your significant other would feel strange and awkward. I’m sorry for asking you to join me,” Scott muttered, getting up and putting his shirt back on.
   “No…Scott, its not like that,” Ivan replied. He didn’t want to hurt Scott, not now, not when they were this close.
   “No? Then how is it Ivan? Why not go? It won’t kill you,” Scott muttered some more. When Scott was in a bad mood, he either muttered or grumbled. When he grumbles, it quite impossible to get him back into a good mood.
   “Its just……I don’t trust other people to leave me alone. I don’t want to be made fun of or embarrass you. People will see me as a prep, still,” Ivan explained. He was sure that this was the only reason, nothing else was bothering him about this.
   “Oh…don’t worry, I’ll be there to protect you boo,” Scott smiled, his arms wrapping around Ivan.
   “Really? You’d do that for me?” Ivan whispered, knowing that Scott would hear him anyway.
   “Definitely,” Scott whispered back, his lips so close to Ivan’s.
   “Thank you, love,” Ivan smiled, then placed his lips on Scott’s. They kissed until Scott released Ivan’s lips.
   “You need to get dressed, I’m sure my mom will come to check up on us,” Scott whispered. Ivan nodded and hurriedly got dressed. Once Ivan was dressed, the two of them left Scott’s room and went to watch some T.V.
   “Will I know anyone other then you?” Ivan asked, out of the blue to.
   “You’ll know the guys,” Scott responded, that wasn’t really what Ivan wanted to hear, but it would have to do.
   “Ok,” Ivan answered, snuggling into Scott’s chest. Ivan knew that Scott’s mom and little sis knew about them already, Scott told them before he brought Ivan over that night.
   When it was almost 8pm, Scott got up and gently pulled Ivan with him.
   “What is it Scott?” Ivan asked once he was in Scott’s room, the door closed.
   “You need to look the part to get into the warehouse,” Scott replied, rummaging through his closet.
   “Oh…well then,” Ivan mumbled. He thought he could go just as is, but he thought wrong.
   “Here, you can borrow my clothes,” Scott said, handing him some of his own clothing.
   “Thanks,” Ivan answered. Ivan supposed it wouldn’t be all that bad now, seeing as how his boyfriend was going to be helping him the whole way.
   “Once you’re ready we can go, it’s a long walk,” Scott whispered, his hands on Ivan’s bare chest.
   “O-ok,” Ivan stuttered, enjoying the feel of Scott so close to him.

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So yes, I cut out a lot of the whole IvanxScott thing, but it wasn't right for young peps, so I left it out. So those parts that you see that make no sense now, well they will later on. But yeays, Ivan has magics! so I hope you all are ok with it thus far. If there is something that needs to change, please let me know. The warning kinda says it all. A little of almost everything that one would worry about is in this chapter, so please beware. thanks and Read and Comment! ^_^
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Re: A Perfect Match
« Reply #14 on: September 14, 2009, 09:10:58 AM »
HOLY COW BUCKETS!! I haven't updated in how long! Well, I guess me having chapter 8 is a good thing then. So here it is!
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warning: well...some of everything, and lots of diolouge!

A Perfect Match
By Dark Dragon
Chapter 8

   It took Ivan awhile to get ready, seeing as how Scott didn’t leave the room, and the fact that Scott was pretty much all over him as he tried to get ready. But Ivan managed to be ready just on time. Once Ivan was ready they both left and Scott led the way to the warehouse.
   The walk was silent, except for the occasional kiss on the cheek, or grope. Once they got to the warehouse Scott led them right up to the bouncer. He looked at them both once and let them in right away.
   “I suppose he knows you,” Ivan muttered, walking behind Scott.
   “He knows a lot of people, he just likes me,” Scott mused, knowing that Ivan was being sarcastic.
   “Oh,” Ivan replied. When they walked into the dance room, which was huge, dark with some multi-coloured lights, and a bar at the far end, Ivan just stared.
   “Great isn’t it?” Scott smiled, he loved going to these parties.
   “Yeah,” Ivan gasped. It was beautiful, in it’s own way.
   “Let’s dance!” Scott said, bringing Ivan with him. Not waiting for an answer they went straight to the dance floor.
   They danced, talked, danced, danced, went to the bar and had some drinks, danced, danced and danced some more. They danced until it was 5 in the morning, then they decided it would be a good time to leave. They went back to Scott’s place and slept, after taking some Advil.
   The next morning they got up, changed, and went to get something to eat.
   “So what do you want to eat?” Scott asked, rummaging through the cupboards.
   “Do you have pop tarts?” Ivan asked, hoping so.
   “Uuuh…yeah, we do. Cool, a whole box!” Scott beamed, happy they had a whole box of pop tarts.
   “Sweet!” Ivan enthused. Feeling just a bit drunk still.
   “Let’s eat the whole thing!” Scott chuckled, also feeling a bit drunk still to.
   “Yes!” Ivan smirked.
   Moments later, they realized that wasn’t the best idea they have had.
   “Ugh! My stomach hurts soooo much!” Scott complained.
   “I think I’m gonna puke,” Ivan muttered, hold his stomach.
   “I guess this wasn’t one of my greatest ideas,” Scott muttered, feeling bad that he hurt himself and Ivan at the same time.
   “It’s ok, really. I just never had so many pop tarts at once,” Ivan explained in a whisper.
   “I never thought that I had 5 boxes though,” Scott continued, still feeling ill and upset.
   “Neither did I,” Ivan replied, trying to comfort his boyfriend.
   “Want to go for a walk?” Scott asked suddenly, standing up.
   “Sure, but I might puke all over the sidewalk,” Ivan warned with a small smile.
   “That’s fine, boo,” Scott smiled back. He took Ivan’s hand and walked out of the house.
   “Scott…you’re not wearing a shirt,” Ivan stated, blushing.
   “Eh?” Scott replied, looking down at himself, “So it seems.”
   “Should we…go back to get you one…or just……” Ivan started to feel a little uncomfortable and possessive, seeing as how every one can see his boyfriend half naked down the street.
   “Nah, I’m fine as is. Why? Do you think I should cover up?” Scott asked, looking over at Ivan with a small smirk. Scott liked a jealous and over protective Ivan.
   “Well…I don’t want your fan girls staring. You’re mine, and I don’t want to share,” Ivan muttered, blushing.
   “Ah, well you do realize that you’re not wearing a shirt either. I don’t want to share you either, boo,” Scott stated and as to prove his point he brought Ivan close to him and wrapped an arm around his waist.
   “I’m not?” Ivan asked, then looked down at himself, and blushed even more, “I suppose I’m not. Odd.”
   “Not odd, seeing as how we made out and fooled around a bit before actually sleeping,” Scott stated, Ivan was redder than red can be.
   “Scott!” Ivan hissed, looking a little bit away.
   “Sorry boo,” Scott whispered, gently placing a kiss on Ivan’s cheek.
   “So what do you want to do now?” Ivan asked, walking around town with Scott’s arm around him.
   “Just walk and bask in the sun, why did you have something in mind?” Scott asked, as they walked aimlessly around town half nekkid.
   “Not really, I like your idea anyway,” Ivan replied, starting to feel a little sleepy now.
   “Let’s go to the park,” Scott suggested, noticing Ivan’s exhaustion.
   “Mmkay,” Ivan mumbled, trying to stay awake now.
   They walked to the park, a little bit of staggering and struggle, but they still got there. Once in the park, Scott lead Ivan to a nice tree with lots of shade. Scott sat down by the tree, Ivan sat down with him then eventually laid down in Scott’s lap.
   “This is new,” Brad said, just walking out of the bushes.
   “What is? Me being in the park with no shirt, or me outwardly being gay?” Scott asked, glaring a little bit at Brad.
   “Hmm, both really. By the way, nice pink marks on your back,” Brad muttered, starting to walk away.
   “Thanks!” Scott called off to him, sounding proud of the pink marks.
   Scott and Ivan sat by the tree until late. Scott gently nudged Ivan.
   “Hmm?” Ivan mumbled, starting to wake up.
   “Boo, it’s 7pm, you may need to get home,” Scott whispered.
   “What!” Ivan yelled, jumping to his feet.
   “Hn, there a problem?” Scott asked, standing up as well.
   “My sister is going to be sooo pissed!” Ivan shouted, running off in the direction of Scott’s place.
   “*Sigh* I should have figured,” Scott mumbled, running after him.
   They ran all the way to Scott’s house, rushed into Scott’s room, and hunted down Ivan’s shirt and some of his other items he seemed to not be wearing. After all that was sorted out, Ivan got ready to leave.
   “Bye Scott, see you later,” Ivan said, kissing his boyfriend on the cheek.
   “Bye boo,” Scott whispered, kissing Ivan on the cheek as well.
   “Bye,” Ivan blushed and left.
   ‘Off to feel the angry wrath of my over protective sister, goodie,’ Ivan thought darkly on the walk home.

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So here it is! the elatest edition to my story! Even when ANOTHER one of our kittens died today, at 1 in the morning. I still manage to get a post up. I hope u all enjoy the story so far! Read and Comment, as usual!
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All this pain, all this hate, all that noise hurting my mind. I don't want to hear them, I want them to leave, I want to be left alone, with thoughts, not voices. They are mean, they are evil, they want me to do things that I just can't. I want them quiet, shut up, Shut up, SHUT UP, SHUT UP!!!! Leave me alone and let me think! Don't hurt me, stop taunting me, Stop making me cry and hurting myself! I just want to be FREE!!!!
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